Topic: Take another little piece...
FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 01:00 AM
Tonight I sit and stare, at my computer screen...
and, not once, did I see through the night,
what I wish that I had seen.
Someone... that touches me. touches my soul.
Someone, that feels me, and makes me feel whole.
Tonight, is like any other night,
Where I do not find what I seek...
I take the risk of being found out,
and at others, do I peek.
Some have such profound words, that say who they might be,
Others preach of things they've done, or what they'de like to see.
Few take time to really say, what they want most of all,
and it's in these few profiles, that I see now and then,
that my tears begin to fall.
I could love her... or maybe her, she has a nice qoute at the end.
And this one, the words that she's written here, oh, yes, how they make my heart mend.
Maybe over there, a small little thing, a profile none the less...
It's only had three clicks on it, and yet, this girls a goddess.
Now I don't say that, because of her pic... although many are consistenly good,
it's the words that she wrote, that nobody reads, almost like initials carved in the wood...
(of a tree...)
(a tree, that no-one, on a computer will see)
So many lovers, left all alone, looking for someone that will pick-up the phone, and let them know, that their love has been shown...
and that someone is willing to take it home...
But, well, that's just lonely me...
And although we're both about as lonely as lonely can be...
While nobodies looking at you, nobodies looking at me...
And it's funny, that no-one sees what I see.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent


littleMadmax101's photo
Thu 03/13/08 01:45 AM
bro you speak most humble words for so many of us out here. be coolglasses

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 03/13/08 02:17 AM
Frozn, I believe you hit the nail on the head.. it's really amazing that with all the people here that we don't see more people hooking up.. Good one my friend..drinker

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 03:24 AM
Littlemadmax... Thanks! I'll try to stay as cool as a FroznChild can be, lol.

2Btrue... Daniel, as it be. Yes... It is interesting that more people don't hook up....
(maybe because poets can have so many faces)... I don't know, sometimes, that's what attracts me about people.
SO many masks...
But who are we, when we take the mask off?
Me? I'm the letter O... and the letter K.
Lol.

silverwaya's photo
Thu 03/13/08 04:22 AM
I have to admit that that one made a tear arise
you bear your soul in your words and no one sees the real you
that is there great loss my friend
you deserve to be happy and have all the blessings in the world
as fro the hook up, well i have found someone on here and i am very thankful that he found me.
I truly hope that you and Daniel find what you are looking for .
with much love and respect,
C~ smooched flowerforyou flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 04:39 AM

I have to admit that that one made a tear arise
you bear your soul in your words and no one sees the real you
that is there great loss my friend
you deserve to be happy and have all the blessings in the world
as fro the hook up, well i have found someone on here and i am very thankful that he found me.
I truly hope that you and Daniel find what you are looking for .
with much love and respect,
C~ smooched flowerforyou flowerforyou

See, THAT'S why they always say that the good ones are taken.
(should have read C's profile before anyone else got to her)
Oh well... some better man already won. Lol.
Makes me feel good for silver.

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/13/08 07:12 AM
((((( Frozn ))))) ohhh My,, Yes indeed,, such depth and beauty in your words,, Your soul sings, cry and needs such a beautiful Magical quality,,, the masks in life are sometimes easier left on, sharing ones body, soul and mind is quite scary to say the least,, and yes a loss to those who seek unconditional love
Time my friend will bring her to you and you to her,,,

Standing ovation here,,, Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa most
awesome write my friend,,, flowerforyou :heart:

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 08:07 AM

((((( Frozn ))))) ohhh My,, Yes indeed,, such depth and beauty in your words,, Your soul sings, cry and needs such a beautiful Magical quality,,, the masks in life are sometimes easier left on, sharing ones body, soul and mind is quite scary to say the least,, and yes a loss to those who seek unconditional love
Time my friend will bring her to you and you to her,,,

Standing ovation here,,, Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa most
awesome write my friend,,, flowerforyou :heart:

Yowzers... lol... Your standing ovation knocked me off my feet!
Thank you for saying so much LaMom... I always feel as though I've accomplished something, when you reply!