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Topic: Puppet
ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Wed 03/12/08 11:32 PM
sorry rambling on as usual The puppet made of wood Strong but not quite human Boundaries locked by its strings The puppet made of wood Longs to be free Dreams of walking on its own The puppet made of wood Hangs in the corner Until needed The puppet made of wood Brings smiles But only to others not to itself The puppet made of wood Has a broken leg Grows old and gathers dust The puppet made of wood Lies in wait Still longing to be free The puppet made of wood Now hidden in a box Hidden from the world, itself The puppet made of wood Now begins to rot No longer held by its master The puppet made of wood Lays lifeless Turning into the dust from which it came

barefootbaby78 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 2693	Wed 03/12/08 11:33 PM
if the puppet could talk it would say FYF!!!!

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Wed 03/12/08 11:34 PM
if the puppet could talk it would say FYF!!!! It most likely would lol (((Amber))))

barefootbaby78 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 2693	Wed 03/12/08 11:36 PM
on a more serious note though excellent write

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Wed 03/12/08 11:36 PM
on a more serious note though excellent write if you say so but ty Amber

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Wed 03/12/08 11:39 PM
I concur... I thought that this writing was great. The type of writing that I normally aspire to do. (and for something that doesn't rhyme) that's saying alot. This was in-depth, and more the worth reading/pondering.

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Wed 03/12/08 11:40 PM
I concur... I thought that this writing was great. The type of writing that I normally aspire to do. (and for something that doesn't rhyme) that's saying alot. This was in-depth, and more the worth reading/pondering. ty

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Thu 03/13/08 05:10 AM
Chris.... VERY interesting

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 03/13/08 05:33 AM


ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Thu 03/13/08 10:02 AM
Chris.... VERY interesting Hey Puffins

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Thu 03/13/08 10:02 AM
thanx for postin teddy

vegasgirl2007 Joined Sun 12/30/07 Posts: 3748	Thu 03/13/08 10:04 AM
very nice

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Thu 03/13/08 10:08 AM
very nice ty Vegas

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/13/08 10:33 AM
(((( Chris )))) I love your rambles,,, Release the puppet from the box,, bring life back,, Hmmmmmmmm who knows what a new start can bring,,

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Thu 03/13/08 10:34 AM
(((( Chris )))) I love your rambles,,, Release the puppet from the box,, bring life back,, Hmmmmmmmm who knows what a new start can bring,, thanks Mom I wish it were that easy

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/13/08 10:35 AM
(((( Chris )))) I love your rambles,,, Release the puppet from the box,, bring life back,, Hmmmmmmmm who knows what a new start can bring,, thanks Mom I wish it were that easy I know,,, It takes time,,, and lots of tears shed,, yet it too shall pass,,,

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Thu 03/13/08 10:35 AM
(((( Chris )))) I love your rambles,,, Release the puppet from the box,, bring life back,, Hmmmmmmmm who knows what a new start can bring,, thanks Mom I wish it were that easy I know,,, It takes time,,, and lots of tears shed,, yet it too shall pass,,, I hope you're right

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/13/08 10:36 AM
(((( Chris )))) I love your rambles,,, Release the puppet from the box,, bring life back,, Hmmmmmmmm who knows what a new start can bring,, thanks Mom I wish it were that easy I know,,, It takes time,,, and lots of tears shed,, yet it too shall pass,,, I hope you're right I'm a Mom and you know Mom is always right,, Time will tell,,, Believe,,,

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Thu 03/13/08 10:38 AM
(((( Chris )))) I love your rambles,,, Release the puppet from the box,, bring life back,, Hmmmmmmmm who knows what a new start can bring,, thanks Mom I wish it were that easy I know,,, It takes time,,, and lots of tears shed,, yet it too shall pass,,, I hope you're right I'm a Mom and you know Mom is always right,, Time will tell,,, Believe,,,

vegasgirl2007 Joined Sun 12/30/07 Posts: 3748	Thu 03/13/08 11:12 AM
very nice ty Vegas anytime sweetie