Topic: Father Forgive ME
me2g's photo
Wed 03/12/08 03:25 PM
Father please forgive me for I'm about to sin, I can't handle all this pain thats eating from within.
I've owned up to my actions and responsibilities, but what I did in the name of love has cost me everything.
I've cherished life the fullest. You've given me so much, but the peace of mind that I once knew has faded like the sun.
I need to move on now, I just can't get it goin. I pray your back don't turn on me when even though.. I know that its so wrong but part of me is gone, so I ask your understanding these things that need be done.
It gets to be so hard to carry on each day, when there ain't a single night I don't sit up wishing it all would end.

FATHER PLEASE BE WITH ME, FORGIVE ME OF MY SINS. I NEED TO DO THESE FEW LAST THINGS OR IT MIGHT AS WELL ALL END.
YOU KNOW THE SITUATION, SO I DON'T NEED TO TELL, BUT THIS ONE THING OUT THERE TAUNTS ME MAKING LIFE HERE ON EARTH MY HELL....

LIJOMA's photo
Wed 03/12/08 03:29 PM
U are not going to do something crazy now are you?

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Wed 03/12/08 03:35 PM
what's wrong buddy?

me2g's photo
Wed 03/12/08 03:35 PM

U are not going to do something crazy now are you?


laugh laugh nah.. its just part of an old song I wrote...

LIJOMA's photo
Wed 03/12/08 03:39 PM


U are not going to do something crazy now are you?


laugh laugh nah.. its just part of an old song I wrote...




O' Thank Goodness!!!drinker

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Wed 03/12/08 03:45 PM
Cheery!noway

nubian's photo
Wed 03/12/08 03:49 PM
what a relief i was just about to call down fire from heaven man u got me there

me2g's photo
Wed 03/12/08 03:50 PM



U are not going to do something crazy now are you?


laugh laugh nah.. its just part of an old song I wrote...




O' Thank Goodness!!!drinker


If you all really want to know.. the song was about telling a lie..:cry:

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 03/12/08 03:56 PM
It was very well written but gut wrenching to think that you were at your wits end!

God's will be done whatever it may be...flowerforyou

me2g's photo
Wed 03/12/08 04:13 PM

It was very well written but gut wrenching to think that you were at your wits end!

God's will be done whatever it may be...flowerforyou


Well... I'm still alive and kickin.. unbreakable... lol

Silntstrnger's photo
Wed 03/12/08 04:47 PM
was the song from a real life situation?

me2g's photo
Wed 03/12/08 05:41 PM

was the song from a real life situation?


They all are... well 99% of my writing is

FroznChild's photo
Wed 03/12/08 10:38 PM
Lol... what's the other 1% about?
I thought that this write was excellent, in the idea that was portrayed...
Thanks.

me2g's photo
Wed 03/12/08 10:58 PM

Lol... what's the other 1% about?


life experiences others tell me about... and thanks again. I wasn't sure how this one would be recieved

FroznChild's photo
Wed 03/12/08 11:22 PM
I'd just about reckon it was recieved well!
look at all those girls up top.
I mean, look at all those girls, up top.

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/13/08 08:02 AM

Father please forgive me for I'm about to sin, I can't handle all this pain thats eating from within.
I've owned up to my actions and responsibilities, but what I did in the name of love has cost me everything.
I've cherished life the fullest. You've given me so much, but the peace of mind that I once knew has faded like the sun.
I need to move on now, I just can't get it goin. I pray your back don't turn on me when even though.. I know that its so wrong but part of me is gone, so I ask your understanding these things that need be done.
It gets to be so hard to carry on each day, when there ain't a single night I don't sit up wishing it all would end.

FATHER PLEASE BE WITH ME, FORGIVE ME OF MY SINS. I NEED TO DO THESE FEW LAST THINGS OR IT MIGHT AS WELL ALL END.
YOU KNOW THE SITUATION, SO I DON'T NEED TO TELL, BUT THIS ONE THING OUT THERE TAUNTS ME MAKING LIFE HERE ON EARTH MY HELL....


Very heart wrenching indeed,, Yet beautiful to say the least
Nice,,flowerforyou