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Topic: murmurs
no photo
Sun 03/09/08 10:49 AM
encased
by a weather gray
and damp
quietly surrounding me
my nose pressed up against
a window winter cold
while echoes of you
linger
warm desires
unfold
as I shiver
my skin stung
and bruised
with orchid kisses
birthed in
a sultry night ...
I count the hours
as white flowers
fall from the sky
briefly kissing
the ground ...
time slowly
moves on ...
I hear the sound
of an excruciating
reminder
tick tock ...
tick tock ...
Silvered mercury
trickles from
dampened green
with a whisper soft
murmur asking
loves known
yet unseen
when
will I
see you
again.....?


LAMom's photo
Sun 03/09/08 10:53 AM

encased
by a weather gray
and damp
quietly surrounding me
my nose pressed up against
a window winter cold
while echoes of you
linger
warm desires
unfold
as I shiver
my skin stung
and bruised
with orchid kisses
birthed in
a sultry night ...
I count the hours
as white flowers
fall from the sky
briefly kissing
the ground ...
time slowly
moves on ...
I hear the sound
of an excruciating
reminder
tick tock ...
tick tock ...
Silvered mercury
trickles from
dampened green
with a whisper soft
murmur asking
loves known
yet unseen
when
will I
see you
again.....?




Breath taking My Angel,,, Pure Bliss flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 11:07 AM


encased
by a weather gray
and damp
quietly surrounding me
my nose pressed up against
a window winter cold
while echoes of you
linger
warm desires
unfold
as I shiver
my skin stung
and bruised
with orchid kisses
birthed in
a sultry night ...
I count the hours
as white flowers
fall from the sky
briefly kissing
the ground ...
time slowly
moves on ...
I hear the sound
of an excruciating
reminder
tick tock ...
tick tock ...
Silvered mercury
trickles from
dampened green
with a whisper soft
murmur asking
loves known
yet unseen
when
will I
see you
again.....?




Breath taking My Angel,,, Pure Bliss flowerforyou :heart:


:heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 03/09/08 12:00 PM
as white flowers
fall from the sky
I almost want to see snow fall........... Great imagery in this poem Ms Wiz

Noden's photo
Sun 03/09/08 12:03 PM
Awesome my loviness, truly touchingflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 01:45 PM

as white flowers
fall from the sky
I almost want to see snow fall........... Great imagery in this poem Ms Wiz


Thank you Bonny...it was a bit difficult particularly as I'm in Arizona and trust me...there is NO snow here.....:heart:

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 01:46 PM

Awesome my loviness, truly touchingflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank you my sister....xoxoxooxoxox:heart: flowerforyou

kidatheart70's photo
Sun 03/09/08 01:47 PM
Helloflowerforyou smooched

Plenty of snow here Ms.:tongue:

jimz's photo
Sun 03/09/08 01:58 PM
oh yeah, so good, read it once, and I almost memorized it
peace out
jimmy

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 02:16 PM

Helloflowerforyou smooched

Plenty of snow here Ms.:tongue:


Heeeeey kid!!! How are you?? :heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 02:17 PM

oh yeah, so good, read it once, and I almost memorized it
peace out
jimmy


Thank you so much jimmy...you're always so sweet~:heart: flowerforyou

DTHRomeo's photo
Sun 03/09/08 02:50 PM
Nice flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 03:50 PM

Nice flowerforyou



:heart: flowerforyou

wyatt1844's photo
Sun 03/09/08 03:54 PM
Very well done...vivid and emotional...

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 03:59 PM

Very well done...vivid and emotional...


Thank you Wyatt....I had my emotional felt pens out for this one....

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 04:02 PM
When my darkness unfolds and
brings the leaves down
upon your feet.
When all thats green
yields to death.
You shall feel my soft kisses
of frozen mist.

Great read and some thoughts added,lol
:heart: drinker flowerforyou Keep typing I like the way you type.:wink:

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 04:11 PM

When my darkness unfolds and
brings the leaves down
upon your feet.
When all thats green
yields to death.
You shall feel my soft kisses
of frozen mist.

Great read and some thoughts added,lol
:heart: drinker flowerforyou Keep typing I like the way you type.:wink:


Thank you....:heart:

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 03/09/08 07:24 PM
You always seen to grab the attention from my heart. Very nice write. :smile: flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 03/09/08 07:26 PM

You always seen to grab the attention from my heart. Very nice write. :smile: flowerforyou

Thank you Faded, I liked this piece as well...and I dont like everything I write....flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 03/09/08 07:31 PM
You're very welcome hun. Like someone told me once, even if ya don't like it, post it anyway and you'd be surprised what someone can take from it. flowerforyou

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