Topic: undesired
darkendfae's photo
Sun 03/09/08 09:39 AM
UNDESIRED

Caresses linger long after their owner leaves
Leaving bruises in place of love's blush
Laughter haunts a soul already fractured
Tears of sorrow where once there was joy
Smiles fade under a veil of reality
Dreams shattered like the mirror that lies
A sacred gift given with greatest trust
Found empty when the luster wears off
Found lacking when a new one offered
Found gone when it is looked for again




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Sun 03/09/08 09:44 AM

UNDESIRED

Caresses linger long after their owner leaves
Leaving bruises in place of love's blush
Laughter haunts a soul already fractured
Tears of sorrow where once there was joy
Smiles fade under a veil of reality
Dreams shattered like the mirror that lies
A sacred gift given with greatest trust
Found empty when the luster wears off
Found lacking when a new one offered
Found gone when it is looked for again


very enjoyable to read cant wait for more


FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/09/08 09:46 AM

UNDESIRED

Caresses linger long after their owner leaves
Leaving bruises in place of love's blush
Laughter haunts a soul already fractured
Tears of sorrow where once there was joy
Smiles fade under a veil of reality
Dreams shattered like the mirror that lies
A sacred gift given with greatest trust
Found empty when the luster wears off
Found lacking when a new one offered
Found gone when it is looked for again

Impressive... I really liked the depth in this piece... the hindsight... and the foresight, locked together in a struggle, of... lost dreams, an unrealised satisfaction...
or even, of hope.
Thank you Darkendfae...
For sharing this.

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 03/09/08 06:50 PM
Nice write. :smile: flowerforyou