Topic: Fine Dining
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Sat 03/08/08 12:05 PM
Oh god
I'm choking
on the bone of
hypocrisy
another nasty
tidbit
hand fed to me
by the masses
who plead
for their canned
peace and
quiet
a virtual nirvana
that doesn't really
exist ...

And I'm going
down
now that I've found
that even I
am prey to this
meal
I've chosen to
partake in ....
... yeah ...
I chew it up
slowly
but I can't spit
it out
and so at last
I know
what it's all about ...

This is one
fine dining
experience
I'll never forget
well planned
and well seasoned
expectations
well met
And I dig
in my spoon
as I give up
the fight
for my long starved
principles
lean forward
close my eyes
and take
a big bite ....
Ah hypocrisy
a fine meal ...
when cooked well
it's a gourmet
delight ...



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Sat 03/08/08 12:11 PM

Oh god
I'm choking
on the bone of
hypocrisy
another nasty
tidbit
hand fed to me
by the masses
who plead
for their canned
peace and
quiet
a virtual nirvana
that doesn't really
exist ...

And I'm going
down
now that I've found
that even I
am prey to this
meal
I've chosen to
partake in ....
... yeah ...
I chew it up
slowly
but I can't spit
it out
and so at last
I know
what it's all about ...

This is one
fine dining
experience
I'll never forget
well planned
and well seasoned
expectations
well met
And I dig
in my spoon
as I give up
the fight
for my long starved
principles
lean forward
close my eyes
and take
a big bite ....
Ah hypocrisy
a fine meal ...
when cooked well
it's a gourmet
delight ...




i really liked put a smile on my face

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Sat 03/08/08 02:14 PM
Awesome.. That's right up my alleyexplode

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Sat 03/08/08 03:33 PM

Awesome.. That's right up my alleyexplode


<<----hands Will a slice of hypocrisy......

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Sat 03/08/08 05:04 PM
Hey, just wanted you to know, though I feel no poet is better than another, that's why it's so great, you are my kind of writer, I like to read, I can feel the lines, and I think it takes a strong soul to write as you.

peace out
jimmy


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Sat 03/08/08 05:28 PM

Hey, just wanted you to know, though I feel no poet is better than another, that's why it's so great, you are my kind of writer, I like to read, I can feel the lines, and I think it takes a strong soul to write as you.

peace out
jimmy




thank you Jimmy...that's a lovely compliment!!! And I do appreciate it!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Sat 03/08/08 08:10 PM
A strong Soul indeed,,

Most Amazing Writeflowerforyou :heart:

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Sat 03/08/08 08:12 PM

A strong Soul indeed,,

Most Amazing Writeflowerforyou :heart:


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Sun 03/09/08 04:44 AM
Amazing write! flowerforyou drinker
(((MsWizard)))

FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/09/08 06:12 AM
Well done... the styles of these poems, and the deep sentiment, continue to impress me. Thank you.

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Sun 03/09/08 06:14 AM
Awwwwh, woman you know your good

the statement stand out loud and clear

loved the write

your newest friend

Noden

flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile

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Sun 03/09/08 08:24 AM

Amazing write! flowerforyou drinker
(((MsWizard)))



Thank you Teddy! I so appreciate it when you read my stuff! flowerforyou

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Sun 03/09/08 08:24 AM

Well done... the styles of these poems, and the deep sentiment, continue to impress me. Thank you.


Thank you Frozn...flowerforyou

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Sun 03/09/08 08:25 AM

Awwwwh, woman you know your good

the statement stand out loud and clear

loved the write

your newest friend

Noden

flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile



Thank you my friend, I really enjoy sharing my work with so many of you~particularly my friends *smile*...xoxoxo

flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 03/09/08 06:34 PM
At times it seems that hypocrisy has no bounds. Excellent write. :smile: flowerforyou

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Sun 03/09/08 07:25 PM

At times it seems that hypocrisy has no bounds. Excellent write. :smile: flowerforyou


Nope, hypocrisy has no bounds....horrible thought but true...Thank you faded *muah*:heart:

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Sun 03/09/08 07:33 PM
You're very welcome hun. :smile: blushing :heart:

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Tue 03/11/08 09:09 AM
Great writing as always.:smile: :smile:

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Tue 03/11/08 12:42 PM

Great writing as always.:smile: :smile:



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