Topic: a love poem
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Fri 03/07/08 07:59 PM
heart pumps castor oil
one kiss and spark
eyes shine like tin foil
even after dark
that you could attract and repel is physics it's physical

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Fri 03/07/08 08:01 PM

heart pumps castor oil
one kiss and spark
eyes shine like tin foil
even after dark
that you could attract and repel is physics it's physical


didn't longfellow deeds write this? indifferent

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Fri 03/07/08 08:03 PM

didn't longfellow deeds write this? indifferent


lmaolaugh

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Fri 03/07/08 08:06 PM

didn't longfellow deeds write this? indifferent

yes but i got his permission to post so its cool

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Fri 03/07/08 08:07 PM


didn't longfellow deeds write this? indifferent

yes but i got his permission to post so its cool

it's all good then.... I got his back...so I was just checkinlaugh

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Fri 03/07/08 08:10 PM
plagerism is no laughing matter maybe just a smilehappy

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Sat 03/08/08 10:10 AM

plagerism is no laughing matter maybe just a smilehappy


plagerism IS no laughing matter. ever. this was a great write. I loved it.

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Sat 03/08/08 10:20 AM
plagerism IS no laughing matter. ever. this was a great write. I loved it.
thank you, i dont mind criticism but when people critize and show no work of their own thats annoying

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Sat 03/08/08 10:29 AM

plagerism IS no laughing matter. ever. this was a great write. I loved it.
thank you, i dont mind criticism but when people critize and show no work of their own thats annoying


some people are very uncomfortable showing their work because they are not confident of it.....that is a trespass I can forgive...plagerism is not...

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Sat 03/08/08 10:48 AM

heart pumps castor oil
one kiss and spark
eyes shine like tin foil
even after dark
that you could attract and repel is physics it's physical



physics it's physical

Yes I like flowerforyou

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Sat 03/08/08 10:49 AM
physics it's physical

Yes I like flowerforyou

thank u Lamomblushing