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Edited by
Noden
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Fri 03/07/08 03:03 PM
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Sitting on the dock waving my feet
swirling them in the water tickling ripples through my toes thinking back to my younger years all the very cute boys I did meet wondering what they are up to now are they thinking of that day in the sand wow, has time gone swiftly by little ringlets in my hair dancing, twirling in my frilly underwear thinking of the stars that night when you kiss me on my lips oh, I think I blushed for a week but still I think of it today fresh in my mind, just like it was yesterday why is it when we grow up finding someone is so tough I remember running down a beach before I knew it, I had company seems as though it was so easy then into your world, a heart to send now as I sit upon this dock waving my feet in distant thoughts I have only one thing left to say is there really someone coming my way. Noden |
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![]() teehee, thank you , justmenoel ![]() |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, ((Brain)), it's been awhile thanks for the flowers ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, ((Brain)), it's been awhile thanks for the flowers ![]() ![]() ![]() hiya sweety, your very welcome ![]() |
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![]() teehee, thank you , justmenoel ![]() reminds me of those days on the beach |
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"Sitting on the dock waving my feet
swirling them in the water tickling ripples through my toes thinking back to my younger years all the very cute boys I did meet " I've got visions of a little Noden wearing rolled up jeans, pony tails and kicking her feet in the warmth of the water and the warm summer sun.......lovely.... |
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nice write.
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Awwww (((Noden))) I
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, ((Brain)), it's been awhile thanks for the flowers ![]() ![]() ![]() hiya sweety, your very welcome ![]() giggles ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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puts pictures in my head i bet u were born storyteller
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![]() teehee, thank you , justmenoel ![]() reminds me of those days on the beach exactly like I wanted you to feel, ohhhh I am pleased now...thank you very much for letting me know this... ![]() ![]() |
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"Sitting on the dock waving my feet swirling them in the water tickling ripples through my toes thinking back to my younger years all the very cute boys I did meet " I've got visions of a little Noden wearing rolled up jeans, pony tails and kicking her feet in the warmth of the water and the warm summer sun.......lovely.... Awwwwwh, I am a country girl, and your vision was right on the money, I am happy it made you warm inside and gave a peaceful moment, my intentions are fulfilled, of sharing this day with all who stop by, and MsWizard thanks for liking my other poem, "Caught & Shaken" so nice of you to stop by. Please never say sorry... ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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nice write. ![]() Thank you Livelife ![]() |
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Fri 03/07/08 03:19 PM
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"Sitting on the dock waving my feet swirling them in the water tickling ripples through my toes thinking back to my younger years all the very cute boys I did meet " I've got visions of a little Noden wearing rolled up jeans, pony tails and kicking her feet in the warmth of the water and the warm summer sun.......lovely.... Awwwwwh, I am a country girl, and your vision was right on the money, I am happy it made you warm inside and gave a peaceful moment, my intentions are fulfilled, of sharing this day with all who stop by, and MsWizard thanks for liking my other poem, "Caught & Shaken" so nice of you to stop by. Please never say sorry... ![]() ![]() ![]() You're work always makes me warm and smiley Noden....that's why I keep coming back to the poets that do so....and you're right up there at the top of the list sweetheart... ![]() ![]() |
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that was great noden....
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Awwww (((Noden))) I ![]() ![]() Hiya Fresh, glad you did waited for your email addy bugger... ![]() ![]() ![]() hugs Noden |
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puts pictures in my head i bet u were born storyteller Why thank you, Storyteller I don't know if I'd go that far, but I feel all blushy now...teehee ![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome to JSH!!! ![]() |
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Awwww (((Noden))) I ![]() ![]() Hiya Fresh, glad you did waited for your email addy bugger... ![]() ![]() ![]() hugs Noden You should have it now....... ![]() ![]() |
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