Topic: A Girl of Ten, The Boy back then
Mike91ZX's photo
Wed 03/05/08 06:38 PM
She thinks he's cute, she's only ten
Looking back it was much better then
His name's Billy, she wonders will he?
She grabs his hand and than she see's

He turns his head and says to her hi
What's your name, he asks, she says why
Because you're pretty, he stammers
Her heart drops like a hammer

Five years pass, they're still together
It's like Cloud 9, no matter the weather
Holding hands in class and a note gets passed
He asks her please, tell me if you love me

Here comes another Three, isn't it plain to see?
They're meant to be, for he, forever she
Outside the theatre, around her finger
Her face glows gold, what a ring for her

Now Ten years are down, and there's a clown
At their daughter's first day, here in May
Life moves so fast, there goes the past
If you're not the first you'll be the last

The pink bow on baby moves to mommy
He says if anything changes, please call me
It happened last night, it was over before light
Alone in the world, now begins the fight

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/06/08 01:57 AM
Rock on... I thought you hit it rock on.
seemed as tho the flow changed in the middle, but, I liked it.
Thanks for posting..

no photo
Fri 03/07/08 02:03 PM
"He turns his head and says to her hi
What's your name, he asks, she says why
Because you're pretty, he stammers
Her heart drops like a hammer"

Wonderful! Days of first grade and my first love Kirk Alexander fly thru my mind....I loved this...it was touching....

LAMom's photo
Fri 03/07/08 04:48 PM
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