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Your welcome, and thank you again, so are you!
 
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To once again save me from a tormented past to whisp me up from evil grasping the blast holding yourself strong while bullets of fury pierce you skin and to you I scurry "are you alright?, my Sir Daniel, can you really beat him?, do you have the strength, for this fight?." It's a long one not over yet there's tons of things I mostly regret fighting the devil over the years has taken me down several levels But I thank you my dear friend I know it's your duty to make a heart mend I've see you have helped many chosen for you a path to help all and any. I am just dabblin, hope it worked... Yes I can beat him for I walk in Gods light and in my heart beats the strength of his might I will stand strong I will fight the good fight I will push the enemies clear out of sight No one will stand when I draw my sword because I fight with the strength of the Lord My wounds will heal I will be alright know that you can rest in my arms tonight My name is Daniel never have any fear because when you need me I will always be here |
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Very deep poem, but it's an awesome write. Nice work, Ali
~Den |
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Edited by
Noden
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Fri 03/07/08 11:39 AM
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Yes I can beat him for I walk in Gods light and in my heart beats the strength of his might I will stand strong I will fight the good fight I will push the enemies clear out of sight No one will stand when I draw my sword because I fight with the strength of the Lord My wounds will heal I will be alright know that you can rest in my arms tonight My name is Daniel never have any fear because when you need me I will always be here Awwwh, ((Daniel)) thanks so much, come get a big huggy from Noden, sneaks in a kiss, teehee!! 
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Very deep poem, but it's an awesome write. Nice work, Ali
~Den Thanks ((Sitngrin)) glad you liked it...and I also loved the ones you done for me...my exact thoughts... 
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Noden, wanted to let you know you are not alone! I've been there and am here for you. My prayers will go out for you.
Powerful!
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"Quake in my wake
stock taken on tolls watching everlasting drip once tasted then licked" Nice...This caught my interest.... |
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"Quake in my wake stock taken on tolls watching everlasting drip once tasted then licked" Nice...This caught my interest.... Then we are honored one such as you noticed |
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Fri 03/07/08 02:09 PM
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"Quake in my wake stock taken on tolls watching everlasting drip once tasted then licked" Nice...This caught my interest.... Then we are honored one such as you noticed Oh really? "We"?? Who are you, Henry VIII? "One such as you"? Your sarcasm is poor. Use your low caliber ammo for someone asking to be shot. I dont respond often simply because there is too much to respond to here. And I do not respond at ALL to poor writing. Noden, my apologies for getting nasty on your post. However, I dislike rude men who mindlessly shoot off rude remarks that are uncalled for. As for your poem, I enjoyed this write very very much.... |
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"Quake in my wake stock taken on tolls watching everlasting drip once tasted then licked" Nice...This caught my interest.... Hi again, as I mentioned earlier, I am pleased to have you enjoy my poems, I love to write from the darkside, and I can rightfully blame this on, ((Slowhand)), once I saw what he had done in his "Satans" thread, I felt compelled to get my inner demons out, in my writes... Thank so much for enjoying the poetry...
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Noden, wanted to let you know you are not alone! I've been there and am here for you. My prayers will go out for you. Powerful!
thanks so much but I was just throwin out some trash today, it does get messy from time to time....
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Fri 03/07/08 03:48 PM
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"Quake in my wake stock taken on tolls watching everlasting drip once tasted then licked" Nice...This caught my interest.... Hi again, as I mentioned earlier, I am pleased to have you enjoy my poems, I love to write from the darkside, and I can rightfully blame this on, ((Slowhand)), once I saw what he had done in his "Satans" thread, I felt compelled to get my inner demons out, in my writes... Thank so much for enjoying the poetry...
Oh that s1owhand does bring it out of us doesnt he? (laughing)...I do so enjoy your work Noden...you are a very talented young woman and I would like to introduce some of your work to a site I'm on...its very good and I think you would fit in well... |
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"Quake in my wake stock taken on tolls watching everlasting drip once tasted then licked" Nice...This caught my interest.... Then we are honored one such as you noticed Oh really? "We"?? Who are you, Henry VIII? "One such as you"? Your sarcasm is poor. Use your low caliber ammo for someone asking to be shot. I dont respond often simply because there is too much to respond to here. And I do not respond at ALL to poor writing. Noden, my apologies for getting nasty on your post. However, I dislike rude men who mindlessly shoot off rude remarks that are uncalled for. As for your poem, I enjoyed this write very very much.... I am Daniel, didn't mean to come off disrespectfully, sorry about that, but there are many that will disagree with your assumption of me... once again sorry you misunderstood my comment.. |
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I highly disagree with the miss conception... To assume one is being sarcastic, automatically, without knowing them, is above rude... and in my opinion, and in this case... un-called for, and un-provoked...
Daniels and excellent guy, and by my notice of the posts in this forum, was simply having a chill poetry match with Noden... I don't think they'de by writing back and forth, is she found him rude. You can find me rude if you like too, but, I really didn't care for the taste of the attack... And, being who I am... I feel compelled to stick up for Daniel... (Though I try my hardest not to write negative things..., usually for poetry responses, but especially about people) 
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I highly disagree with the miss conception... To assume one is being sarcastic, automatically, without knowing them, is above rude... and in my opinion, and in this case... un-called for, and un-provoked... Daniels and excellent guy, and by my notice of the posts in this forum, was simply having a chill poetry match with Noden... I don't think they'de by writing back and forth, is she found him rude. You can find me rude if you like too, but, I really didn't care for the taste of the attack... And, being who I am... I feel compelled to stick up for Daniel... (Though I try my hardest not to write negative things..., usually for poetry responses, but especially about people)
Thank you Frozn, It's ok, my friend, just a simple misunderstanding, was actually trying to show respect, to my reguard for her poetry.. everything will be ok.. |
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Nice writes both of you. I enjoy reading your posts. You seem to tap into that place I haven't been able to get to yet. Thanks and please keep writing-it gives me something to think about!
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Nice writes both of you. I enjoy reading your posts. You seem to tap into that place I haven't been able to get to yet. Thanks and please keep writing-it gives me something to think about! Thank you so much for that comment, dhutch, and you will find your cliche one day also, it took me a while, but it came...
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