Topic: The Devil's Dance
Mike91ZX's photo
Wed 03/05/08 01:39 PM
Dawn wakes to Devil's dance
All it takes is just one glance
You're sucked in too deep to ever fight back
The day burns on and shadows fade to black

Look around some time and you might see
The chains grab tight, got a hold on me
A Fallen Angel from Heaven cast out to hell
Damned to suffer the fate He made so well

A heart so cold, empty and frail
No hope to live outside of jail
Gazing out, a beautiful woman lookin' so pure
He craved her now and there was no cure

Another day down, another one frown's
A mother cries, her daughter's no longer around
A tormented soul longing for love
Looks up and what he see's above

Clouds as empty of rain as his heart of pain
Grabs the blade and walks in shame
Blood crawls down the skin and breaks from within
Eyes as red as the stain he's ripped in vain

For 10 a year he shed not a tear
Can't figure out why He's not here
No hurt or hate, he swears it's not fate
It waits for no man, this was all His plan...

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/06/08 01:42 AM
Nice write... I thought that it could be a bit smoother at the end... it changes rhyming scheme... but, maybe that's what you wanted.!
Either way, this rocks one.