Topic: Just Maybe
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 12/27/06 12:56 PM
Anger boiling, overflowing
Screaming, yelling, to no avail
Coming apart at the seams
my mind circling round
over silly things
Meaningless thoughts
Feeding the fire in my brain
I try to overcome
tell myself to settle down
but it happens so fast,
in rapid fire succession
Kids out of control
dogs yelping to go out
Tears fall in utter frustration
Is there no end to this
chaos of our home...
Daily chores constantly await
I give and give till there's nothin left
I go to bed alone and empty,
eyes burning and still sleep eludes me
Reflecting upon my day
guilt takes over and again
tears begin to flow
All these emotions
Love
Hate
Guilt
Sorrow
Joy
Peace
Anger
I rejoice just cause I can "feel"
but am saddened 'cause
I feel so alone
I say I've nothin to give
'cause there's no one here
to share it with
I say "I Love You" so easily on the phone
but truly distance separates us
we hang up and
you're gone
Good intentions, Loving words
should be good enough
But I continue to push
you away
'cause baby, I'm scared.
Afraid to trust
'cause I just
don't know how
to stop this cycle...
If I open up and let you in
keep up the walls, but open a door
Will I crumble in a heap
upon the floor
And If I do, will I have the
strength
to get up once more?
Would you still be there
if I fall
to pick up the pieces
and mend these walls
Build a new foundation
begin anew
Help me overcome
and walk with me
It's a lot to ask
this I know
and no guarantee's
which makes it hard...
the quest I ask of you
is a journey of life
Help me Live again
Teach me to Trust
Show me you will be True
and maybe, possibly, surely,
I could take a chance
with you...



slowtogetit's photo
Wed 12/27/06 12:58 PM
wow sweet ,
that is nice, did you write it?

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 12/27/06 01:01 PM
yes...
just now

slowtogetit's photo
Wed 12/27/06 01:05 PM
whewww your a very creative woman. i was reading your description of you
on your page. brought a chuckle, not to many honest woman like
that....lol

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/27/06 01:07 PM
Lonely Rider,set upon his steed,
waiting for your loving deed,
only within your love to feed,
lone wolf cries her lonely need,
forgetting how to let love bleed,
forgetting her truest need,
never to allow loves to feed,

cry on this sleepless Knight,
ghost ships sail with you tonight,
learning to take winged flight,
loving all your dreamy night,
learning from your dreamy write........Lonely Soul

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 12/27/06 01:12 PM
Thanks slowtogetit
honesty is the best policy...lol!

nice tag mike...thanks...
keep up your own good works also...

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Wed 12/27/06 01:14 PM
*pokes SCG* just give him the key, the rest will fall into place

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/27/06 01:19 PM
forgive my tag,
but your words inspire me to write,

Glad to see you back at it!!!

Good Work here S.C.G.!!!

don't forget the puppies!!!

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Wed 12/27/06 01:55 PM
That was great SCG.....I hope that your inspiration...will someday
encourage Michael 1313, to learn how to write.....!

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Wed 12/27/06 02:00 PM
Ontario stop being an ass

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Wed 12/27/06 02:01 PM
Why.....?

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/27/06 02:02 PM
looks like he did not read my last two poems...

nor did he take that train ride...M.

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Wed 12/27/06 02:10 PM
Mikey....look.....rips and burns are my style...it,s kinda yours
too....we both know that it can sometimes go to far....so stop acting
like you,re so clean and pure, because you,re not....nor are most of the
people acting so offended....Vanchau, did,nt like having his authority
challenged, regarding the moderator issue, and, will
likely get rid of all who oppose him on it...so continue to walk
towards the concentration camp quietly....and you,ll be fine....
good luck...!

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Wed 12/27/06 03:22 PM
sounds so familure sweet.

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/27/06 03:51 PM
Ontario...303...

please use this link,and sit quietly,to contemplate...
we all make mistakes,just some of do know when to say when...

Shake?
no hard feelings....M.

http://www.inspiringthots.net/movie/life-on-train.php

ALL ABOARD!!!

no photo
Wed 12/27/06 03:56 PM
Mikey...Dude....I,m a Marine, and a Football Player....I,ve gotten
into brawls with my best friends .....and visited them in the hospital
the next day....and we are still the best of friends...no
offense taken dude...!

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/27/06 03:59 PM
so how was YOUR train ride???

Ontario?

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 12/27/06 05:50 PM
Beautiful SCG, it is hard to let go of the keys. When you do it opens up
a whole new world of possibilities.

G