I am writing a new romance story,not what I'm used to and I am just winging it. It's about a man who lost his wife after she gave birth to their son,Daniel.He has to hire a nanny for him,to take care of the baby while he is away at work.But when Daniel gets sick he asks her to do the the impossible to help his son...To have another child to help Daniel.Hope you all can tell me what you think of it...because I desperately need some feedback...

The house was quiet when he returned home, though it was quite late.Mr.newman wanted to review a new case and the meeting ran later than planned.he laid down his briefcase on the table and called, " Rhiannon?" Loosening his tie from around his neck,he checked the living room for any sight of her.To his relief,she was there,silent and gaping down at a newspaper.
Hearing movement in the doorway,she looked up and squeaked, " You divorced her?But she's dead."Her eyes dropped back down to the paper that she was looking blindly at.She wondered why he divorced her,even when they weren't married anymore.His wife was deceased.
" I know what it looks like,but I have a very good motive to do that",he answered calmly.
Standing up from the couch,Rhia threw the newspaper down and exclaimed, " Motive?Jason,I am not one of your clients or the jury in court.Just tell me why you did it!"Then she realized why he did it.She looked down at his hand and found no ring on his finger.She shifted her blue eyes to look at his shadowed face and asked, " Where's your ring?"
Very low and quietly,Jason said, " You told me that I can't get near you with my ring,that it made you think of her."He stepped closer,somehow knowing that she wasn't used to his closeness.
She looked up at his face and breathed, " I am really tired tonight,Jason.I would just like to go to bed."Rhia turned to go,until a hand grasped her arm.She turned around slowly,thing the worst.What did he want?What was he going to do to her?
" Just give me a kiss goodnight,"he said low,huskily." That is all I ask of you tonight."Jason let go of her arm and noticed that she relaxed.
Rhia nodded slightly and brought her lips to his waiting mouth.She had to admit that he was gentle,unlike Mark had been.Her breath hitched when his tongue slipped into her mouth and he deepened the kiss.She moaned softly when he pushed her body against his,their breathing esculating with every kiss,every caress.She could feel every inch of him now,but wanted to touch his skin against hers.
He pulled away at the sound of Daniel crying on the baby monitor.he looked at her,as she gaped at him in awe.
" Diana never said...She didn't tell me that you were..."Her voice died away and she fled the living room to the now whimpering baby.
Jason looked after her,his blood still zinging within his veins and his body was still responsive.He shoved his jacket off and listened to her cooing his son to sleep before retiring for the night.

More detail in his entering the house might increase the gravity of the scene and the characters seem like they're speaking to the readers rather than eachother... but other than that it is very good...

Thanx for the input...I do appreciate it.