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Alright so I jsut recently finally added written information about myself into my profile. Any feedback on what I wrote would be greatly appreciated. Im new to this whole thing and wasn't really sure what all to include.
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Great profile! I would possibly add some information about what you are looking for at this site.
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SHAZAM
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cute
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black and whites;very sleek
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Edited by
Kg1
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Mon 03/03/08 08:16 PM
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Your profile gives a lot of good info about you some good interesting facts. the only con perhaps is the small injection of "thats why I model" it almost sounds like you are trying to bragg about being good looking, I'm sure that wasn't the intention but we can see that you are good looking just by your pictures, it may come off a little snobish. Other then that you have one or two typos, otherwise everything is great
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Edited by
Kg1
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Mon 03/03/08 08:21 PM
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