Topic: Dedicated to all the Men
JulieMP's photo
Sun 03/02/08 10:42 PM
I was walking on the beach barefoot, I liked the sand but it was gritty
My emotions spiraled through anger, delight, elation then pity
Next I thought its odd how the defining factor of things can make you wonder why
Like saying "I like Bob Newhart but he's so dry"
Makes me think of macaroni
Not the noodle but the pony
The one that Yankee Doodle rode through town... or maybe it was a city
Anyways my toes were still gritty

~fin~

johncarl's photo
Sun 03/02/08 10:45 PM
:smile: :smile: :smile:

no photo
Sun 03/02/08 10:49 PM
happy flowerforyou drinker

JulieMP's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:00 PM
Edited by JulieMP on Sun 03/02/08 11:01 PM
Oh you guys are why poetry was invented.

I shall write another poem for you right now, impromptu.



alas, I will wash your feet with my hair
If that is gross I don't care
I went to CVS and bought expensive shampoo
let me tell you, it cost a buck o two
But what is this you cut off your feet?
To buy buy me a brush to keep my hair so neat?
Well that is funny because to tell the truth
Two days ago I ripped out my hair from the roots
So I was just kidding about washing your feet
Because I don't have hair anymore

blushing
Lets

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:03 PM
nice

higlander's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:04 PM
Edited by higlander on Sun 03/02/08 11:05 PM
i like happy happy happy

JulieMP's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:07 PM
thanks. I am exhausted.

Sitngrin's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:10 PM

thanks. I am exhausted.


We need to work on your stamina :wink:

~Den

JulieMP's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:19 PM

We need to work on your stamina :wink:

~Den


Ohhh No. I won't fall for that line a fifth time.

FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:56 PM
over all funny and sporatic... (lol, especially the stamina)
unique angle, leaves the mind to dangle...
on your poetry.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:26 PM
flowerforyou