Topic: Dedicated to all the Men | |
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I was walking on the beach barefoot, I liked the sand but it was gritty
My emotions spiraled through anger, delight, elation then pity Next I thought its odd how the defining factor of things can make you wonder why Like saying "I like Bob Newhart but he's so dry" Makes me think of macaroni Not the noodle but the pony The one that Yankee Doodle rode through town... or maybe it was a city Anyways my toes were still gritty ~fin~ |
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Edited by
JulieMP
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Sun 03/02/08 11:01 PM
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Oh you guys are why poetry was invented.
I shall write another poem for you right now, impromptu. alas, I will wash your feet with my hair If that is gross I don't care I went to CVS and bought expensive shampoo let me tell you, it cost a buck o two But what is this you cut off your feet? To buy buy me a brush to keep my hair so neat? Well that is funny because to tell the truth Two days ago I ripped out my hair from the roots So I was just kidding about washing your feet Because I don't have hair anymore Lets |
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nice
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Edited by
higlander
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Sun 03/02/08 11:05 PM
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i like
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thanks. I am exhausted.
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thanks. I am exhausted. We need to work on your stamina ~Den |
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We need to work on your stamina ~Den Ohhh No. I won't fall for that line a fifth time. |
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over all funny and sporatic... (lol, especially the stamina)
unique angle, leaves the mind to dangle... on your poetry. |
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