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now back from crashing waves
i was supposed to be a lost hero never in my darkness did i lose hope my smile real yet my sadness too back the sea too far ahead i am entrenched in cement walls i am in one of many so the echos are really never only me now when i am near the sea it is cold raging mysterious i cannot enter its eternity it's veiled truth its brutal humanity i fall back my head breathing nothing while the sea only breathes itself my beginning where i can find my soul |
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Very good!
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Very nice write jimz. I could feel some peace flowing from the words.
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