way before my hurst
before my birth I figured the worst
heavy letters and sleezy b's screamin into me
loppin photos on a peg
pathways, grass ways, plottin pictures on my leg
smokin weed with all the will to please
I lay wealth as knives lay bree
long ago when I had mounds of purple dro
a certain glow With the matching flow
I remembered Matt, the "dub sack"
spun it back, tipped the hat back for my old school cat
long gone, old like pong, like dirt on your fingers
reminiscent dusk and pulls on buddy "binger"
play the hear say, come on up another day
I'm thinner like water, blood is better, I'm a sinner
I remember when I wrote songs for baby Brenner
without a doubt I'm growing from a sprout
you left me here screaming "please let me out"
a mentor of mind sores, you kept me from the floor
remember me, remember the trees, remember you and yours

Man this was a first for me, mostly cus I don't listen to rap,...but when gettin to the second line, "before my birth I figured the worst", it grab my attention, made me wanna read more, I'd have to tell ya man, has a good beat, the wording, feelin the scene, and not just a rhyming thang...loved to hear it loud,
trying it out in a poetry place, like gotpoetry.com, you'll like it....can even do vid or taping of your writes....

huhuh, I am surprised....me likes

Thanks man. I was just thinking about my friend that left me for rehab a long time ago and I haven't seen him since. Maybe that puts it into perspective for u.