Topic: Babyface.......
Webcredo's photo
Sun 03/02/08 01:18 AM
I sit watching a women with a face that time hasn't changed. I look deep into her eyes and see a world that I would love to join. Does she know how I feel? Does she want I feel? I held her in my arms as she wept for a love she can't have, and I wept knowing the Love she has inside is a Love hard to find! I lay at her side wanting to tell her how I feel and how I want to stop her Pain. But as I hold her I find myself crying- -- for I wish she was crying for me!! I long to be with the women with the baby face! Am I wrong?


kristina90's photo
Sun 03/02/08 01:56 AM
not at all,we are all human
p.s. very good and creative writing:wink:

FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/02/08 03:16 AM
Well written... (who can assume the desires of the heart or flesh)? I don't know... but you sure stated it well.