Topic: the snow
otterman's photo
Tue 02/26/08 08:18 AM
As i watch the snow falling
i'm carried away
to a much safer place
no hurries no worries
only simpletons play
its beautiful silence
not elating nor condeming
closing eyes to opinion
perfection itself
needless for changing
yet unsoiled
with our human touch
our marketed purity
the price is how much
i am destined to hold
this snow in my hand
destined for greatness
for i rule my land
its chill brings me comfort
matches the heart
do not call me selfish
twas mine from the start
who dares take it from me
wait just dont understand
the snows meerly water
in the palm of my hand

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/26/08 08:21 AM

As i watch the snow falling
i'm carried away
to a much safer place
no hurries no worries
only simpletons play
its beautiful silence
not elating nor condeming
closing eyes to opinion
perfection itself
needless for changing
yet unsoiled
with our human touch
our marketed purity
the price is how much
i am destined to hold
this snow in my hand
destined for greatness
for i rule my land
its chill brings me comfort
matches the heart
do not call me selfish
twas mine from the start
who dares take it from me
wait just dont understand
the snows meerly water
in the palm of my hand



the snows meerly water
in the palm of my hand

I see more than water my friend,, I see the reflection,
quite a site..

Love this,,, flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/26/08 08:21 AM
Nice one otterman. :smile:

Puffins1958's photo
Tue 02/26/08 08:22 AM
Just beautiful....

flowerforyou flowerforyou

otterman's photo
Tue 02/26/08 08:31 AM
thanx guys la you amaze me you always see beauty that is so refreshing

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/26/08 10:50 AM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou