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Take A Chance
The webs of pain will spawn A lifetime of deceit, Without someone to help you, You never are complete. The darkness you invite Will live and grow so long, It only takes a friend To show you what is wrong. It only takes a moment To push someone away, It only takes forever To dwell upon that pain. If only you would read The pages of a heart, You may find an entry That ended as a start. The love you have is willing, You only need to nudge, Yet if you keep to darkness, Never will you budge. The tears that have been felt In present and in past, Can fade away in sunlight If you remove the shadow's cast. To be a friend and one sincere You must try to understand, When your friends are hurting, They need your helping hand. If you never open And never choose to dance, You'll always choose regret And think about that chance. If you've read these words And taken them to heart, You'll try at least to open And be just who you are. We all can fall in darkness And we all can lose our way, Our nights can stay forever And all are blind some days. Fadedspirit 2/14/2008 |
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WoW!!!!! Again most awesome,,,,,
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Thanks 1956deluxe. glad ya liked it.
Awww thanks LAMom, not sure about awesome, but since you said it, I'll accept.....lol Awww, thanks SEXYAZZKAY. |
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excellent write man truth
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Very very nice
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Very very good Faded, same point made about most people still being haunted by their past, and making anyone new walk in anothers shadow.. very very good my friend..
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that was good x
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nice write faded
the sidelines are the resting place of many dead dreams |
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Thanks otterman and MsTeddyBear.
Thanks 2Btrue. I actually hadn't noticed that until after I posted it. lol. Thanks for your comment and I'm glad you liked the post. Awww, thanks shauna. Very true kc. I think I've been on the sidelines a few times as well. Thanks for reading kc. |
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