Topic: Take A Chance
Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/26/08 07:55 AM
Take A Chance

The webs of pain will spawn
A lifetime of deceit,
Without someone to help you,
You never are complete.

The darkness you invite
Will live and grow so long,
It only takes a friend
To show you what is wrong.

It only takes a moment
To push someone away,
It only takes forever
To dwell upon that pain.

If only you would read
The pages of a heart,
You may find an entry
That ended as a start.

The love you have is willing,
You only need to nudge,
Yet if you keep to darkness,
Never will you budge.

The tears that have been felt
In present and in past,
Can fade away in sunlight
If you remove the shadow's cast.

To be a friend and one sincere
You must try to understand,
When your friends are hurting,
They need your helping hand.

If you never open
And never choose to dance,
You'll always choose regret
And think about that chance.

If you've read these words
And taken them to heart,
You'll try at least to open
And be just who you are.

We all can fall in darkness
And we all can lose our way,
Our nights can stay forever
And all are blind some days.

Fadedspirit 2/14/2008

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Tue 02/26/08 07:56 AM
drinker

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/26/08 07:57 AM
WoW!!!!! Again most awesome,,,,, flowerforyou :heart:

KAY KAY 's photo
Tue 02/26/08 07:57 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/26/08 08:10 AM
Thanks 1956deluxe. :smile: glad ya liked it.

Awww thanks LAMom, not sure about awesome, but since you said it, I'll accept.....lol :smile:

Awww, thanks SEXYAZZKAY. :smile: flowerforyou

otterman's photo
Tue 02/26/08 08:21 AM
excellent write man truth

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/26/08 10:38 AM
Very very nice flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/26/08 10:47 AM
Very very good Faded, same point made about most people still being haunted by their past, and making anyone new walk in anothers shadow.. very very good my friend..drinker

shauna22's photo
Tue 02/26/08 03:14 PM
that was good xflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Tue 02/26/08 04:43 PM
nice write faded

the sidelines are the resting place of many dead dreams

drinker

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/27/08 06:17 AM
Thanks otterman and MsTeddyBear. :smile:

Thanks 2Btrue. I actually hadn't noticed that until after I posted it. lol. Thanks for your comment and I'm glad you liked the post. :smile:

Awww, thanks shauna. :smile:

Very true kc. I think I've been on the sidelines a few times as well. Thanks for reading kc. :smile: