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Topic: Winter Poem....
merlot42 Joined Tue 02/05/08 Posts: 533	Wed 02/20/08 06:30 PM
SON OF A BI#&% IT'S COLD!!

brian325 Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 4132	Wed 02/20/08 06:31 PM


shmuzii316 Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 522	Wed 02/20/08 06:32 PM
lol...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 02/20/08 06:33 PM
You need a few more lines in there... Like... repeat line one a few times! Add a brrrrrrrr or two...

merlot42 Joined Tue 02/05/08 Posts: 533	Wed 02/20/08 06:33 PM
So, it may not be my best work...But the structure is solid...

EtherealEmbers Joined Sun 02/03/08 Posts: 6580	Wed 02/20/08 06:38 PM
best poem ever. 5 stars

merlot42 Joined Tue 02/05/08 Posts: 533	Wed 02/20/08 06:41 PM
best poem ever. 5 stars Thank you...You have just made my day! I now know that the hard work I put into this poem was worth while...I guess you could say that I have touched peoples lives with my art... Thank you!!

shoes4rhon Joined Sat 02/02/08 Posts: 3411	Wed 02/20/08 06:45 PM
It created a picture of everlasting beauty and the decriptive creativity ... I would say publish it

robertsonm30 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 79	Wed 02/20/08 07:16 PM
LOL thats awesome

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