Topic: lonlieness
isaac_dede's photo
Mon 02/18/08 10:04 PM
In a see loneliness I abide,
To stay with you, so hard I tried
But you still left my side
That day my heart died
Now my heart is cold
There is no more beauty to behold
The rain, snow, or the sunset
No beauty as of yet,
Even the beginning of a new day
Without you seems dull and grey
You have taken all my joy,
Treating my heart like a forgotten toy,
That you strung along and played,
Then you just hurt me, and put me away
But through it all I stayed.
Because I knew there would be another day,
When once again you would come and play,
I knew it was just because you got bored,
But these moments with you I adored,
But the last time wasn’t the same,
Because I sat waiting and you never came,
I knew something was amiss,
Then you told me, this was my last kiss.
Now I just lay in paralysis,
Wishing for my heart to cease and desist.
Oh the peace it would bring,
To be with Jesus my king,
But I know I must go on living,
So All I can do is sit and pray,
That another will have a love worth giving
Oh how I long for this day



LAMom's photo
Mon 02/18/08 10:06 PM
Another shall see your soul and share in the joy of your presence your love your kindness,,

Hugs to you flowerforyou

Puffins1958's photo
Mon 02/18/08 10:11 PM
Beautifully written, I can feel your sadness.

It will get better, you can be sure of that

flowerforyou

jamesina's photo
Mon 02/18/08 10:21 PM
I really love this poem. it's really great.
I've been in a simular situation, you explained everything through and through.
I'm sure you'll find someone who truley deserves you.
:smile:
:heart: Jamesina

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 02/18/08 10:22 PM
smokin

madamx7316's photo
Mon 02/18/08 11:03 PM
smooched :heart: flowerforyou love it!

isaac_dede's photo
Tue 02/19/08 05:49 AM
thank you everyone.

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/19/08 05:59 AM
Nice write. :smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/19/08 12:58 PM
Once bitten...
Don't be shy...
Give love another try...
It will be sweet...
Not bitter for you...
Once you find the one to be true...
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

Being sad only makes being happy even better.
(Quote from the teddybear chronicles...)