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lost without love...
lost,lonely feelings of guilt,what went wrong? lost without love... did your heart break when you heard my lonely song? lost without love... will you ever forgive me,will it take very long? lost without love... why does it have to hurt so much without you? lost without love... oh now what will I ever do? lost without love... my soul is ever more lonely without you, lost without love... feelings of love now empty my heart, lost without love... will we ever get back to what once was? lost without love... so very lost from your warm heart, lost without love... so very lost without your hand to hold on to... lost without love... |
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This is very well written Michael one of your best!!
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Thanx C.C.P.,and if somebody puts this one to some music...
I want 20 % royalties!!! |
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Very, very nice M. Proves the K.I.S.S. principal. I like it.
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yup...I play golf the same way...KISS
keep it simple stupid!!! LMAO!!! |
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good poem and i to know your hearts song dude,,,good-one-micky.
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Beautiful Michael!
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yes you are. i mean the poem is lol
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yep Michael... it deserves royalties !!!!
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funny what some quiet time can do for you...
now if we can find a music writer...hmmmmmm.... Will,JT,y'all help us out here will ya? |
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Very beautiful...
Lost Love??? Nice! |
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hey there S.C.G.!!! LONG TIME NO SEE!!!
glad you likes th poem too!!! |
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bump
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Good Michael,some times its,will I be able to forgive you.
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yea...but I would like to get this to music!!!
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Nice work Michael...talk about me you guys need to publish some of your
work...or at least try. |
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well this is public huh?
do you know any music writers? Jt, Will and Lion...??? String benders? where y'all at??? 6 strings,or 12???? it's all good to my ears!!! |
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I have sold a song before, but the band never made it.
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hey Billroot?
thought you was a guy? you know your avatar is a girl lion?lol |
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and Crazyman...your chapter is a good read!
and I still wants a copy when you get it done ok??? |
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