Topic: hole in my heart
itsmetina's photo
Wed 02/13/08 12:03 PM
Hole In My Heart
My heart aches
Missing you
And wanting to
Scream out your name
Into this vast space where we first met
This place that brought us so close
Is also what makes it so easy to separate
To lose track of you in between casual conversations
And witty quips sent racing through wire
Through time and space
From heart to heart
Until
One day you're no longer there
And I have to face the truth
That this really hurts
And I really felt
Because what we thought was just a game
Became ever so real
And you were what kept me smiling
And hoping
And now that you are not there
To share
Or laugh
For me to cling to at the end of a long day
When I need to reach out
This is when I feel the ache
The incredible void
This hole in my heart
That used to be filled by you


deadpoet's photo
Wed 02/13/08 12:10 PM
I could relate.. and it's saddened me to think that i could relate to that poem.. it's really beautiful and i'm' glad you shared it on this site. ^_^

fastlinnie's photo
Wed 02/13/08 12:13 PM
great read tina thank youflowerforyou flowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/13/08 12:17 PM
brokenheart

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Wed 02/13/08 12:17 PM
Been there and Visit often frown

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/14/08 02:56 AM
flowerforyou

DTHRomeo's photo
Thu 02/14/08 03:03 AM
flowerforyou

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Thu 02/14/08 07:16 AM
You were able to place into words that which I have not been able to express..for the words get caught in my throat.



flowerforyou


Awesome.

itsmetina's photo
Thu 02/14/08 11:15 AM
will my hole ever be filled.............

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/14/08 11:16 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Hugs to you,,, Yes,, In time ...