Topic: check out mine and how can I make it better
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Thu 02/07/08 02:52 PM
Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks

cenasgirl91's photo
Thu 02/07/08 02:54 PM

Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks
improve what? huh

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 02/07/08 02:55 PM
love love It dont get no better than you sweetheartlove love

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Thu 02/07/08 02:57 PM

Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks


NOTHING NEEDS IMPROVING. IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU COULD PUT A FEW MORE PICTURES UP. flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

EtherealEmbers's photo
Thu 02/07/08 03:02 PM

Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks


Add more pics of yourself, so people can see different expressions.

Don't start out with a negative thought... take out the first sentence up to "here goes."

In one place you say "there head on straight" and it should be "their."

Good luck in your search!:wink:


dysFUNctional's photo
Thu 02/07/08 03:07 PM
Looks really good to me. There is another spelling mistake: wether s/b whether. Also check your grammer and add more pics.
But otherwise you are looking good babe. Good Luck flowerforyou

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Thu 02/07/08 03:15 PM
Thanks everyone, i added some more pics. I just didn't know if I needed to add more info or anything like that. This is a great site.