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Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks
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Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks |
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It dont get no better than you sweetheart
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Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks NOTHING NEEDS IMPROVING. IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU COULD PUT A FEW MORE PICTURES UP. |
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Check it out and let me know how to improve it. thanks Add more pics of yourself, so people can see different expressions. Don't start out with a negative thought... take out the first sentence up to "here goes." In one place you say "there head on straight" and it should be "their." Good luck in your search! |
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Looks really good to me. There is another spelling mistake: wether s/b whether. Also check your grammer and add more pics.
But otherwise you are looking good babe. Good Luck |
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Thanks everyone, i added some more pics. I just didn't know if I needed to add more info or anything like that. This is a great site.
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