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Topic: I wrote this for my 3 y/o daughter tell me what you think?
link97my Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 6798	Tue 02/05/08 09:40 PM
What I'm saying is how I feel this is it. It's the real deal I truely love you, as hish as he can be. No one can ever get between you and me. The day you were born, was a wonderful surprise. It keeps going and going untill the end of time. You're full of life, with no regretes. My daughter,....my love,.....my life. Well this is just part of how I feel, I know, you know I love you for real.

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Tue 02/05/08 09:44 PM
She will love that!

link97my Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 6798	Tue 02/05/08 09:45 PM
She will love that! Thank you

trying_to_fly Joined Thu 10/05/06 Posts: 6258	Tue 02/05/08 09:45 PM
That's really great....good write

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 02/05/08 09:46 PM


link97my Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 6798	Tue 02/05/08 09:46 PM
That's really great....good write Thanks dude, she inspired me.

robinlynn42 Joined Tue 01/01/08 Posts: 2251	Wed 02/06/08 10:14 AM
yes that was good and simple should put a copy in her baby book. thumbs up

link97my Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 6798	Wed 02/06/08 03:10 PM
yes that was good and simple should put a copy in her baby book. thumbs up Thank you robin I appriciate it. Just had to write that on here so I can feel better about myself and let others know how I feel about my daughter.

link97my Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 6798	Thu 02/07/08 10:37 PM
I got to keep it in my top 25

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 02/07/08 10:38 PM
nice sentiment

link97my Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 6798	Thu 02/07/08 10:46 PM
nice sentiment Thanks a lot I appriciate it

link97my Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 6798	Fri 02/08/08 04:54 PM
Still in my top 25

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