Topic: Thoughts In Contemplation
Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/05/08 07:09 PM
Thoughts In Contemplation

Cradled in the womb of existance
And born of the fabric of life.
A need of existance which brought on persistance,
The questions are asked but why?
The answers are few and only one true
Will claim what's perceived as a prize.
In gentle persuasion to finish equation
We'll have to wait and see.
A heart in the balance as soul is distraught,
Confused to the core as what it may be.
The circle turns round in minute sound
The whispers have spoken their theme,
Construed in mistrust a suit donned of rust
The well meaning knight is thus me.

Fadedspirit 2/5/2008

Jill298's photo
Tue 02/05/08 07:10 PM
aren't thoughts always in contemplation??

GregB1977's photo
Tue 02/05/08 07:22 PM
Usually, unless it is an illiteration. However thoughts would be the Noun and Contemplate would be the verb. So you can contimplate a thought, but realistically a thought cannot commit the act of contimplation.

But hey its a poem, why not.