Topic: With you...
greeneyedlady42's photo
Mon 12/11/06 07:13 AM
Sitting across from you-
I cannot break my gaze.
Find myself looking at
every curve of your face.

Hanging on every word
How intently you speak to me
Sharing all the thoughts
Of what you see us to be.

I lay in bed next to you
Talking into the night
I cant close my eyes to sleep
It just doesnt feel right

That I may miss a single move
Or peaceful breath you take
So I lay suspended in love
Happy to be awake.

I have lived too lonely
Too long without the feel
Of a man who truly cared
Of a man who could be real.

I can go on like this forever
Running off the fuel of your smile
I could follow this any where
Would crawl a million miles.

So happy just to sit with you
No matter where we land
No greater feeling than just us two
together hand in hand.

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Mon 12/11/06 07:17 AM
THAT IS A AWSOME POEM. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

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Mon 12/11/06 07:18 AM
Beautiful Green, may your journey together never end :)

Jeff1086's photo
Mon 12/11/06 10:32 AM
She asked me?
Could I ever love her?


Question replayed,
In and out of thoughts,
As a sublimed vision,
She was,
The first,
And last,
Thing to cross,
My mind,
Each day,

Love Doctor,
Should have,
Prescribed her an inhaler,
For I knew she grew tired,
From running over and over,
In circles,
Through my thoughts,

She was,
Like the Alpha,
And Omega,
Beginning and end,
Visuals of sunrises,
And sunsets,
Naturally brought new days,
Happiness,

Even though Miserable,
During short moments,
Without her,
I pictured,
Imperfection,
If I didn't have her,
Upside down smiles,
Drawn upon my face,
When distance separated us,
I'd walk dead to the world,
If she was not at my presence,

She- asked- me -if -I –loved- her,
Willing to walk,
Run,
Crawl,
Skip,
Swim,
Climb,
Leap,
The world and back,
With no front,
Searching in and out,
Over and under,
And around every,
Undefined angle,
This world could possibly give to me,

I searched,
Took journeys,
Found hidden escapes,
Tip toed till the end of the world,
Hoping to find words,
That could be as of,
Or more,
Powerful than,
I-Love-You,

I-Love-You

Is all I could get,
3 words,
I-Love-You
So –simple- yet -so -powerful,


But I wanted to climb,
To the highest peek,
Swim down to the bottomless,
Seas,
Forever,
Searching in the mystic rivers,
Willing to run from east to west,
Climbing the lines of latitude,
Traveling up against,
Bad weathers,
In and out every cave,
Hoping,
Wishing,
No praying,
I could just find,
Words,
Words that could,
Define,
The way I feel for you,

All I Got was,
I – Love – You