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i'm living in a world of assembled metal monsters and robotically stacked windows a world where the most inspiring quote is 'everything happens for a reason' now everyone is looking for forgiveness and the answers to their panicked prayers streets are scattered and falling in shambles with broken hearts and shattered dreams from people who throw things away just because they're afraid of feeling everyone is desperate for love and a reassurance that they deserve anything at all i was taught the world was all about love but somewhere in the chaos of intertwining platinum branches and hate cascading from foreign clouds i guess that got mixed up |
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Welcome to JSH!
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i'm living in a world of assembled metal monsters and robotically stacked windows a world where the most inspiring quote is 'everything happens for a reason' now everyone is looking for forgiveness and the answers to their panicked prayers streets are scattered and falling in shambles with broken hearts and shattered dreams from people who throw things away just because they're afraid of feeling everyone is desperate for love and a reassurance that they deserve anything at all i was taught the world was all about love but somewhere in the chaos of intertwining platinum branches and hate cascading from foreign clouds i guess that got mixed up Good poem. |
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That was really enjoyable to read.. the imagery was nice though a bit saddening but i really like poems that paint vivid images in my head.. when i first started reading it, it mislead me though..i thought it would be a silly poem or song.. then i kept reading and it got really saddening and slightly deep.. but overall it was really beautiful.
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thank you everyone :)
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