Topic: Dream In Silence
Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/04/08 04:57 PM
Dream In Silence

To live and love, a dream in time,
A thought complex while hearts thus rhyme.
A silence so subtile, yet felt it loud!
Be careful not to stir the crowd.
A chance perhaps to sit and think
Or to lay upon fields of dream.
A passion felt but not yet known,
It's roots run deep but has it grown?
A fire unquenched and burning hot,
To douce it now, I think so, Not!
Never you know in dreams what lay
And never you see the path is made.
So take your heart and dare to dream,
Forever a silence is silence indeed.

Fadedspirit 2/4/2008

deadpoet's photo
Mon 02/04/08 04:59 PM
I'm pretty sure you're the same guy that wrote another poem that i found really amazing but if you're not that's okay.. but if you are then you are a great poet.. i found this poem nearly flawless.. =]

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/04/08 05:01 PM
Many thanks again deadpoet...:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 02/04/08 05:02 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

lookhere46's photo
Mon 02/04/08 05:13 PM
really nice

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/04/08 05:28 PM
Thanks MsTeddyBear!:smile:

Thanks for the comment lookhere!:smile:

shauna22's photo
Tue 02/05/08 06:35 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/05/08 06:55 AM
Awww thanks Shauna!:smile: