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Topic: Take it From Me
DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Sat 02/02/08 08:15 PM Edited by DeathsTreaty on Sat 02/02/08 08:19 PM
Take what I no longer want, Grab it, Squash it, Stomp on it, Or Hold it in your hand, Keep it forever, Take mine as you hand over yours, Pull straight from my Chest, Just Take it from me, I only ask you to never give it back

peachiegirl28 Joined Sun 09/16/07 Posts: 19292	Sat 02/02/08 08:17 PM


DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Sat 02/02/08 08:18 PM
Hello Peachie

peachiegirl28 Joined Sun 09/16/07 Posts: 19292	Sat 02/02/08 08:18 PM
hello death....love what u wrote

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Sat 02/02/08 08:19 PM
Nice

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Sat 02/02/08 08:19 PM
^^ I just wrote this one

munchichi7 Joined Fri 01/05/07 Posts: 17	Sat 02/02/08 08:32 PM
that was really in lightning , and surprisingly i understood , and hold the thought . ouch

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 02/02/08 09:49 PM
+ =

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sun 02/03/08 01:22 AM
You do come up with some really cool ways of showing some fine lines.

Lily0923 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 20429	Sun 02/03/08 01:23 AM
Beautiful...as always.

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sun 02/03/08 04:49 AM
awwwwwwwwwwh, I see light

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