Topic: Essence
a4leafclover2u2's photo
Sat 02/02/08 08:00 PM
Edited by a4leafclover2u2 on Sat 02/02/08 08:09 PM
Misty soul, drizzle not
dreading to infict like rain.
One pour drop forgot
sampling on fingers bane.

Salty sliding whistle..
wheeze of shudder underneath
an awaiting coy missle
still tied within' it's sheath.

Whelp of pardon, subdued,
foundered against a utopic pic.
Mental metal once crude
an eneven pile of Zen brick.

Awnser awaits an even tongue,
settled by hearts desire.
Sing, not flung..ring, not wrung
out on top of the fire.

Queer visions sway kitsch,
Troy devestated..pleading vale.
Which pitch soothes which witch
from devisive wintry hail?!

4leaf

no photo
Sat 02/02/08 08:01 PM
this is good.:smile:

a4leafclover2u2's photo
Sat 02/02/08 08:04 PM
Thanx:smile: and welcome to JSH!a4leafclover2u2

a4leafclover2u2's photo
Sat 02/02/08 08:05 PM
Hell u been here longer than me!laugh

Thanx:smile: and welcome to JSH!a4leafclover2u2

jimz's photo
Sun 02/03/08 10:01 AM
cooool!
peace
jimmy

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 02/03/08 10:03 AM
Very good write

a4leafclover2u2's photo
Sun 02/03/08 12:20 PM
Tnx..Jim..Quilling to the taskglasses

cooool!
peace
jimmy

a4leafclover2u2's photo
Sun 02/03/08 12:21 PM
Tnx..BonnieMiss..I :heart: ur' last two posts bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 02/03/08 03:00 PM
flowerforyou happy flowerforyou