Topic: friends
manome's photo
Sat 12/09/06 09:42 AM
Friends are;
unique creatures,
who give advice-
like pouring water
from a glass,
and we sit-
listening,
wishing that-
their turths
would quit
the painful-
realities that
hearts feel,
sometimes
even in the guts,
raising self
doubts,
about the beauty
of unquestioned
love....
Advise is
an opinion,
of anothers
point of view,
exposing,
what they have
done
in past performances,
and expect
you to do the same-
for this I know,
advise to anothers
heart
is,
a rotten shame.

catchme_ifucan's photo
Sat 12/09/06 10:27 AM
S. good work, L

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/09/06 10:33 AM
yes,good words,but brings up so many questions too...M.