Topic: IN NEED OF A WRITER....
fairyloveruntamed's photo
Fri 12/08/06 01:26 PM
I NEED ONE OF YOU TALENTED WRITERS HELP...I NEED A POEM TO DECORATE THE
INSIDE OF A CHRISTMAS GIFT... MY GIRLFRIEND AND I HAVE BEEN TOGETHER FOR
ALMOST 9 MONTHS. WE WERE ONLY SUPPOSE TO BE FRIENDS WITH BENEFITS. AND
NOW WE LOVE EACH OTHER INCREDIBLY... SHE HAS A "WIFE" WHOM SHE HAS NOT
SEEN IN PERSON IN 3 YEARS AND YES TO ALL WHO IS WONDERING I KNEW WHEN I
CAME INTO THIS RELATIONSHIP SHE WAS THERE. IN 17 MORE MONTHS THE WIFE
WILL BE BACK IN THE PICTURE AND I WILL STEP ASIDE AND THE LOVE WE HAVE
WILL BE A PAST THING... I AGREED TO DO THIS BECAUSE THE LOVE I HAVE FOR
HER IS THAT INTENSE AND I WOULD RATHER TO HAVE THIS LOVE FOR ONLY A
SHORT WHILE INSTEAD OF NEVER AT ALL.. SO I NEED A POEM DESCRIBING THAT
KIND OF LOVE.... ALSO I HAVE MADE A PROMISE TO HER THAT WHEN THEY GET
BACK TOGEHTER IF THINGS DON'T WORK OUT I WILL BE HERE...SO HELP ME
PLEASE

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Fri 12/08/06 02:06 PM
I will be here
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Just as I promised you,
my love remains so strong
you will see when time is through
I have loved you all along
I have stood there in a distance
still feeling the fire we made
strong enough,but still I'm missing
all the love you gave
I watched you take different roads
to where I had no claim
I laid awake in my bed alone
just crying out your name
I hope you somehow remember me
and for once not look away
I want to dream into those eyes again someday

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Fri 12/08/06 02:34 PM
very nice JT

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Fri 12/08/06 02:37 PM
thank you very much/I was in a similiar situation before..my girlfriend
broke up with me to go back with her ex..and said I need you to stand
behind me on this..so I know how it feels to be the silent warrior

Tneal's photo
Fri 12/08/06 03:09 PM
very nice JT

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/08/06 03:47 PM
you ask a task of rhyme,for loving short,but not forgotten,
ok...try this on for sighs...


Not Forgotten Loves...

tho our love was Heaven sent,
for loves true,it just went,
loving sweet was our power,
showing each our finest hour,
loving arms,passion charms,
living dreams,passion screams,
we lived out time for our Love,
flying high within th' Dove,
dreaming on thru lonely night,
hoping love grew,forever right,
for if you now should ever fall,
know me now forever and tall,
return to us for once and all.......M1313

just for love lost,finding it soonest...forever th' poet...M.

fairyloveruntamed's photo
Fri 12/08/06 03:55 PM
VERY NICE... I LOVE THEM BOTH JT AND MICHAEL...THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME

karmafury's photo
Fri 12/08/06 03:56 PM
Real Nice M.

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/08/06 04:10 PM
thank you for this chance to rhyme,
as I really enjoyed my time,
poems to me for all to see,
artworks of words,for me,
give my works just a taste,
not for hurt,not for waste,
feeling love,not in haste,
passing on this lonely gift,
wishing hearts will only lift,
wish upon my poetic star,
find out who you truely are,
find your love,find your power,
passion screams your finest hour......M1313

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Sat 12/09/06 06:58 AM
cool poem Mike!I liked them.

iceprincess's photo
Sat 12/09/06 07:04 AM
you both are really talented mike and JT damn i'm jealous now.LOL oh
well i can least read them if not write them.

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/09/06 08:27 AM
thanx JT was your words that inspired mine...poet friend...M.