Topic: BREAKDOWN
VenusianWoman's photo
Fri 12/08/06 10:03 AM
BREAKDOWN

I wish I knew how to heal your pain
To fix whatever's gone wrong
All the confusion and burdens you bear
Are hidden inside too long

They take their toll when you least expect
Your world is inside out
Things you thought you knew for sure
Are now replaced with doubt

Your mind is blank,your body's numb
Not sure which way to turn
Everything seems oddly strange
But gives no sense for concern

Just know I'm here if you should call
And need a friend near by
To lend an ear or hold you close
When you feel the need to cry




Kevin3824's photo
Fri 12/08/06 11:58 AM
That was nice. I hope your not actually feeling that way though. If you
are and want or need a friend to talk to I am always near e-mail me if
you like.

fairyloveruntamed's photo
Fri 12/08/06 12:41 PM
I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR POEM... HOPE TO FIND MORE FROM YOU...

karmafury's photo
Fri 12/08/06 01:19 PM
Very nice. I like it.