Topic: "lovers insomnia"
jayf81974's photo
Thu 01/24/08 12:23 PM
as i lay here quietly as you sleep
i watch as you lay there, you look so sweet
your eyes shut gently not tight and stressed
i hear you breathing and watch your chest
i lay here thinking about our future
and wondered if we'd have a son or daughter
and still your lying here fast asleep
not caring or worrying about the week
not a thought about whats here or whats now
but far away and on a cloud
i wish i could join you in that perfect place
as i lay here and stroke your face
you look so lovely, such a beautiful princess
with no cares no worries and no stress
but still you sleep with out any quarms
so i lay down beside you and hold you in my arms
you feel so warm, so soft and gentle
i close my eyes and drift off a little
i wake just breifly to kiss you good night
then i lay down and hold you tight
with a smile on my face i fall asleep
till i see you in the morning sweet dreams my sweet xxxx




wildsideof35's photo
Thu 01/24/08 12:25 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

bttrflyv2's photo
Thu 01/24/08 12:30 PM
wow.....amazing

Noden's photo
Thu 01/24/08 12:31 PM
glasses wow, that was nice, I enjoyed that...flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 01/24/08 12:40 PM
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Dreamer01's photo
Thu 01/24/08 12:47 PM
that was amazing!

jayf81974's photo
Thu 01/24/08 02:41 PM
thanks peeps i am glad you liked it

Noden's photo
Thu 01/24/08 06:15 PM

thanks peeps i am glad you liked it


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songstress1's photo
Thu 01/24/08 06:25 PM
awesome write!!! flowerforyou

jayf81974's photo
Fri 01/25/08 10:50 AM
thank you to all who replied i will try and write something equally nice today x

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 01/25/08 03:32 PM
drinker happy

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 01/26/08 12:05 AM
Very nice. Brought back some memories there.

jayf81974's photo
Sat 01/26/08 08:23 AM
i am glad that i have brought some memories back thanks for the replies xx