Disagreement and Reconciliation

Storms roll in as rain falls light,
Impending darkness within blind sight,
Veiled within misconception's curse,
Found therein semantic verse.
Hearts thus lain upon cold stone,
Removed from pride's undaunted throne.
Adorned with vengeance and bound by hate,
Neither heart accepts their fate.
Unmoved by love, reduced by pain,
Relationship begins to drain.
Curse the pride for wisdom's sake
Followed in forgiven's wake.
Reconcile ebb to light
Avert the lust to stand and fight.
Sacrifice the inner pride
And bear the love you hold inside.

Fadedspirit 1/22/2008

Good job.......I really felt the anger in that poem!!!

Thanks Gypsy.

You have much depth behind those dark eyes of yours.



Namaste'

Very good and discriptive

good stuff

this was well thought out

a good read

Thanks Storm. Not many stop to notice.

Thanks Noden and otterman.

Thanks kc....I've been trying to find the right words for this one for a while. It's actually a culmination of different things that I've had on my mind and thought maybe it would make for good poetry as well. I'm glad ya liked it.