Topic: as i watch..........................
otterman's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:30 AM
As i watch her sleep, does she know how i feel,how much i need her,how i love her smell,the softness of her skin,the way her eyes see me,for what i really am,for all that i can be,her slow breaths transcends me,to the warmth of summer sun,new each day,bringing hope to all who earnestly seek,that my strength is in her arms,regardless of what mine hold,how the beat of her heart,soothes me and makes me safe,when she whispers,it is all i can hear,to feel her warmth on my neck,how our bodies become one,dancing with our souls,the perfect dance of the heavens,how her being my best friend,makes me complete,and all this i see,as i watch her sleep.

EarthSprite's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:34 AM
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Tue 01/22/08 10:35 AM
Nice poem.....but I find it kinda creepy when someone watches me sleep........just a thought.....laugh laugh laugh

The_Unforgiven's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:38 AM
Woah Gypsy Ur Pic Is Super Sexy lol. Nice Poem By The Way.

Noden's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:49 AM
Nice write , Ottersmokin drinker

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:57 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww yes to watch one sleep,,,Quite amazing

flowerforyou

jayf81974's photo
Tue 01/22/08 11:04 AM
hi otter you is some writer thats a great poem man

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Tue 01/22/08 11:10 AM

As i watch her sleep, does she know how i feel,how much i need her,how i love her smell,the softness of her skin,the way her eyes see me,for what i really am,for all that i can be,her slow breaths transcends me,to the warmth of summer sun,new each day,bringing hope to all who earnestly seek,that my strength is in her arms,regardless of what mine hold,how the beat of her heart,soothes me and makes me safe,when she whispers,it is all i can hear,to feel her warmth on my neck,how our bodies become one,dancing with our souls,the perfect dance of the heavens,how her being my best friend,makes me complete,and all this i see,as i watch her sleep.

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/22/08 11:40 AM
nice

drinker