Topic: last line repeated stanzas
jayf81974's photo
Tue 01/22/08 05:26 AM
Edited by jayf81974 on Tue 01/22/08 05:27 AM
hi yo people inda house
this is the place to let it out
just follow the flow to see where it go
just do eight lines not too much yo
lets see where it takes us
with out much effort
with out much fuss
so people have some fun i welcome each and every one

jayf81974's photo
Tue 01/22/08 05:41 AM
so people have some fun i welcome each and every one
its not that hard to write this stuff
so come on join me but you cant cus
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thats very bad come on guys
i will leave you people for a while
to play and laugh
i leave with a smile

otterman's photo
Tue 01/22/08 01:36 PM
what up jay--thanx for the note--eight lines is easy--here take a tokesmokin --but now its time--to get off this box--to eat and play drums--now that trully rocks