Topic: Intangible Love
BigCurt_31's photo
Sun 01/20/08 04:33 PM
Wandering the world searching for a sign, a wisp of her scent
Mystical smell wafting aloft on cloud, feelings divine
Masked by an allusive path, courted by a whimsical rhyme
Music to my ears, something so great, something so fine

Gold is the color she wears, brown as the color of her eyes
Wondering in my mind, just how far the her passion lies
Gripped by her entangling vines, wrenched by her vice
She has my heart; I know this and wouldn’t think twice

Such, a simple fool I am, she has lead me to a test
Just one chance to make her see, to love I always divest
Moments like this you get one chance
To win her love, a contest of speared by a lance

Chivalrous and cavalier as I may be, but will she ever see
I stand on the field of battle, my heart to her I do decree
Such, a long time ago, my soul resides, turning the tide
A moment in life, a steed on my back, I reach for her hand, please ride

A kiss on of her hand, a fair maiden of beauty
Loyal to her and my queen, an oath, it is my duty
Bound by love, constrained by my pride, without haste I plunge on the sword
I am her protector, guided by faith, not an instant of hesitation, not even a word

I see her still; I watch from above, I think to me, will she ever find love
I feel her pain, I hear her cry, as a message carried by wings, maybe a dove
Grasping for the air, I have no wings, a peasant in life for her, I scream
To her I once stood tall, a knight to her I somehow seem

She has left this world behind, traded for something new
A chance at love, her feelings are so true
Reborn by a desire, deep down inside, a new look on life
Something to believe in, not only in vain, not only in strife

If she only had knew how I felt, the moment we met, my heart did melt
Distanced was our meeting, from the same lands, separated by only by our two hands
Joining them would be great, locked in a grip, never to be unleashed
A parting word, a whisper on our lips, slowly I turn to leave

Gripped by a feeling that I shall not depart
I feel her heart beating, nothing shall tear us apart
To her love always I am bound, in woven I am
I love her, to all else, they are damned!

Copyrighted(2004) by BigCurt_31

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 01/20/08 04:42 PM
Prolific and captavating. A superbly written piece.

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 01/20/08 07:27 PM
Very nicely written.

LAMom's photo
Sun 01/20/08 07:57 PM
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Yes, Yes,, awesome

ellgee1976's photo
Sun 01/20/08 09:28 PM
Curt, you've done it again...


very 'wow'

BigCurt_31's photo
Sun 01/20/08 09:54 PM

Curt, you've done it again...


very 'wow'

Thanks for the compliment dear! It means alot to me to have all of you comment on my work's!
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