Topic: firefly
deltasissy's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:48 PM

Firefly

And for a brief moment
You captured my light.
Smother me with your palm,
Or let me fade into the night.
For such a little life
Seems hardly important at all.

no photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:49 PM
smokin i like

kkoldazice's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:50 PM
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Gumbyvs's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:50 PM


Firefly

And for a brief moment
You captured my light.
Smother me with your palm,
Or let me fade into the night.
For such a little life
Seems hardly important at all.



To me, seems there are a few lines missing, but I find things missing in everything. Yet it was deep.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:53 PM
drinker

I love watching lightining bugs (fireflys)

deltasissy's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:54 PM

drinker

I love watching lightining bugs (fireflys)



yeah, we call 'em lightning bugs too, but somehow it seemed more poetic calling it a firefly

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:55 PM
nice