Topic: The Final Breath
Sitngrin's photo
Wed 01/16/08 05:13 PM
Razor sharp is the point, as I find
my heart and prepare to leave this life
I stand there in the pits of hell,
my hand upon the knife
Tears flowing down my clammy cheeks,
I sway until I fall
Sharp metal blade enters my soul,
to no ones ears I squall
Freezing air succumbs to warmth, the blood it quickly flows
I hold my breath and push it more;
I'm just dying too slow
I gasp for air and find a spot to be my resting place
I close my eyes and feel death's touch,
the end I will embrace
I feel my heart begin to stop, the beats become so rare
I lie there dying on the ground
and whisper a soft prayer
Forgive me Lord for what I've done I hope you understand
The heartbeats stop, and my life ends; taken by my own hand.

no photo
Wed 01/16/08 05:15 PM

Face down on the way to the end
I'm fighting to breathe, don't bury me
Consume our lives
Control our minds
Ive taken the strength that was left behind

I'm pulling deeper from within (deeper from within)
The answer bleeding through my skin
Serenity dies

If I could breathe again (if I could breathe again)
Id choose a new beginning (a new beginning)

Salvation will save us all
The lacerations will heal
Rise beyond the threshold
Surpass all obstructions
We will survive

I'm pulling deeper from within (deeper from within)
The answer bleeding through my skin
Serenity dies

If I could breathe again (if I could breathe again)
Id choose a new beginning (a new beginning)

I'm falling away from this artificial life
Omit treason passed upon the
My revelation
Beginning a new life

Sitngrin's photo
Wed 01/16/08 05:16 PM
Nice addition :D

no photo
Wed 01/16/08 05:19 PM
thanx ^^

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 01/16/08 05:55 PM
:cry:



drinker

Sitngrin's photo
Thu 01/17/08 02:38 AM
I'm hoping that's a good thing, LMAO laugh

flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 01/17/08 08:34 AM
Separate: well done, the combo: most awesome y'all!.

Sitngrin's photo
Thu 01/17/08 12:44 PM
Thanks, I do like the combo as well