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With your mere presence alone, I am left breathless
To feel your hand take mine sends me into a peaceful rest When you hold me, I feel our hearts become one beat; distinct and clear To peer into your eyes makes the rest of the world disappear The beautiful tone of your voice drowns out all surrounding sounds To your spirit, my heart and soul will be eternally bound Your lips touch mine as soft and gentle as morning lays it's dew Without a doubt, I am completely, utterly, and uncontrollably consumed by you |
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Beautiful..
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that is very touching and sweet
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Thank you very much
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the pleasure is all mine. your very talented
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I appreciate you saying that. I love to write and have been up and down every emotional roller coaster life has to offer, lol, so it's easier to relate to.
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have you ever had anything published?
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Very nice. Hope to see more of your writing.
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Awesome write
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Only did some stuff on poetry.com. Don't really know who to contact to be honest with you & Thank you very much Faded
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Thank you very much
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Hope to see more...
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nice work
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Thank you!
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Oh to be consumed! Nice!
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Ditto!
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Wow, nice flow to your words, and welcome to the site...
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