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Topic: Burden
NxOhMissFriedxD Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 39	Sat 01/12/08 07:41 PM
Tell me what you honestly think. take this burden from me dont want this pain anymore may you take this burden from me take it from deep within me eat me heart out til you chock and die dont want this pain anymore

LDollar Joined Sat 01/05/08 Posts: 43	Sat 01/12/08 07:43 PM
This is deep, sometimes when I was In Iraq I would wish an IED would hit my truck so I wouldnt have to live with seeing another one of our guys die. For some reason it relates to me, im sure you ment something totally different in this poem but thats how I feel about it.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 01/12/08 07:45 PM
I don't think any of us want pain... but without the pain... How would we know what good feels like without something to compare it to?

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 01/12/08 07:55 PM
good one

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 01/12/08 08:51 PM

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