Tell me what you think honestly.

what happened with this place?
hardship made it stronger
growing into something grand
now theres nothing left

nothings here, it will never be
absent minded is peace of mind
your not here, where you ever?
alone in this world, lost forever

i cant see into this hole
fighting and pretending with you
who are you?
where should i be?

i can hear you in myself
take it. do it. there's nothing left
am i here? or am i gone?
are you taking over and letting me go?

let me out. i want to be free
who am i and what have i become?
i need to know, who have i become?
i might never know

sounds like a hy cu to me young lady,but is cool nun the same

Seriously are you stalking me, every poem you write is pretty much my life story.

its intense