Topic: Any suggestions?
flagman21's photo
Thu 01/10/08 06:50 AM
Pls read and rate.. any CONSTRUCTIVE suggestions would be appreciated!

tks in advance,
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flagman21's photo
Thu 01/10/08 07:06 AM
wow.. 21 views and not a single response.. I must be perfect.. NOT! LOL

readypanub's photo
Thu 01/10/08 07:08 AM
your wording is a bit aggressive...try "prefer"...and "would really enjoy" and maybe just tone it down a bit. Feels a bit forced (no offense)...good luck