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Topic: Some think that friends should just be friends
randy912 Joined Thu 10/26/06 Posts: 405	Wed 01/09/08 12:33 PM
Some people think that friends should be just friends; To try for more might ruin what they have. I think the closest friend is one you love, Sharing life with words and lips and hands. One caress unravels mysteries Lodged behind the most elaborate mask. The revelation's more than worth the risk. I want with you such sweet simplicities. I want us to be friends who now are free To speak with all the languages of touch. I want to share your anguish with a kiss And feel your happiness against my cheek.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 01/09/08 12:35 PM


Betsy_baby Joined Sat 07/28/07 Posts: 803	Wed 01/09/08 12:40 PM
Some people think that friends should be just friends; To try for more might ruin what they have. I think the closest friend is one you love, Sharing life with words and lips and hands. One caress unravels mysteries Lodged behind the most elaborate mask. The revelation's more than worth the risk. I want with you such sweet simplicities. I want us to be friends who now are free To speak with all the languages of touch. I want to share your anguish with a kiss And feel your happiness against my cheek. i loved it!!

randy912 Joined Thu 10/26/06 Posts: 405	Wed 01/09/08 12:41 PM
Thanks Betsy , I did not realize you where on and thanks for adding me as a friend

Fade2Black Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 50752	Wed 01/09/08 12:43 PM
Very nice. That's the best kind of lover .. your best friend!

TiffaIrishGirl Joined Tue 11/20/07 Posts: 1115	Wed 01/09/08 12:46 PM
Oh yes tis true...to have your friend be the one you love has got to be the best

gregory583 Joined Wed 08/29/07 Posts: 526	Wed 01/09/08 12:49 PM
Some people think that friends should be just friends; To try for more might ruin what they have. I think the closest friend is one you love, Sharing life with words and lips and hands. One caress unravels mysteries Lodged behind the most elaborate mask. The revelation's more than worth the risk. I want with you such sweet simplicities. I want us to be friends who now are free To speak with all the languages of touch. I want to share your anguish with a kiss And feel your happiness against my cheek. bestfrioends aremore likey to turn out to be the best mate so yes its very true.i got your back on that one

DTHRomeo Joined Wed 06/20/07 Posts: 43387	Wed 01/09/08 12:50 PM


Ghostrider2u Joined Thu 05/17/07 Posts: 6953	Wed 01/09/08 12:54 PM
I really like the way you put this thought into words. Five thumbs up....if I had five

Snugglesbyfire Joined Sun 04/15/07 Posts: 24422	Wed 01/09/08 03:14 PM
The best relationship starts with a foundation of friendship, and builds from there. Beautifully stated

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