Topic: not my sin... | |
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as the sun sets on this life of mine and my last meal i dine i wonder what i could have done what happened to my sun? is it really the losing? or is it the loss is it the price we pay? or is it the cost? will this circle ever end? will you be my friend? again my lover? or is it realy over? is this the price i pay for love? is there anyone up above? to listen to my prayer.. as i crumble into my chair.... no, this is all there is to be at least.. for me... alone again i go. though it hurts me so i have much to be greatful for so as i close the door on our lives in my mind the future i will try and find sad again i pay as i sit her and pray alone again for something that was, not my sin sorry everyone.. this kinda came outa my head this way.. maybe ill smooth it out.. maybe ill leave it.. who knows.. ether way.. its me. ? IZ |
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its good i can relate to it too
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it is good the way it reads, but if you want to work it then go for it girl...your on a roll
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leave it as is
comes from a heart that has paid for it |
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it is not over
my thoughtful lover the pain from healing a price we pay for this design etched not in skin but memories now not only yours but as well mine |
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slow... thank you. and miss you...
Kc.. you are right.. i think i like it as is... ty |
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I thought it was nice...
Poems dont have to rhyme you know. |
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Came out good the way it is. Nice write.
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I thought it was nice... Poems dont have to rhyme you know. i kno.. this one just kinda ended up that way... |
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(((( izzie )))))
<<<<< sits and holds her beautiful daughter for a bit,,, Love you Mom |
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(((( izzie ))))) <<<<< sits and holds her beautiful daughter for a bit,,, Love you Mom love you mommie ((((mom))) |
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(((izzie)))
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((((((teddy)))))))))))
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i see you have days like mine i hope yours get better ....
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