Topic: not my sin...
izzie's photo
Tue 01/08/08 11:19 PM




as the sun sets on this life of mine

and my last meal i dine

i wonder what i could have done

what happened to my sun?



is it really the losing?

or is it the loss

is it the price we pay?

or is it the cost?



will this circle ever end?

will you be my friend?

again my lover?

or is it realy over?



is this the price i pay for love?

is there anyone up above?

to listen to my prayer..

as i crumble into my chair....



no, this is all there is to be

at least.. for me...

alone again i go.

though it hurts me so



i have much to be greatful for

so as i close the door

on our lives in my mind

the future i will try and find



sad again i pay

as i sit her and pray

alone again

for something that was, not my sin











sorry everyone.. this kinda came outa my head this way.. maybe ill smooth it out.. maybe ill leave it.. who knows.. ether way.. its me.

?

IZ
brokenheart

lookingformrright8's photo
Tue 01/08/08 11:20 PM
its good i can relate to it too

Sportie2's photo
Tue 01/08/08 11:22 PM
indifferent it is good the way it reads, but if you want to work it then go for it girl...your on a roll flowerforyou flowerforyou brokenheart

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/09/08 01:00 AM
leave it as is
comes from a heart that has paid for it

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s1owhand's photo
Wed 01/09/08 02:54 AM
it is not over
my thoughtful lover
the pain from healing
a price we pay
for this design
etched not in skin
but memories
now not only yours
but as well
mine

flowerforyou :cry: :heart:

izzie's photo
Wed 01/09/08 10:26 PM
slow... thank you. and miss you...


Kc.. you are right.. i think i like it as is...


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klugman's photo
Wed 01/09/08 10:31 PM
I thought it was nice...

Poems dont have to rhyme you know.

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 01/09/08 11:52 PM
Came out good the way it is. Nice write.

izzie's photo
Wed 01/09/08 11:55 PM

I thought it was nice...

Poems dont have to rhyme you know.



i kno..
this one just kinda ended up that way...

LAMom's photo
Thu 01/10/08 07:34 AM
(((( izzie )))))

<<<<< sits and holds her beautiful daughter for a bit,,,
Love you Mom :heart: flowerforyou

izzie's photo
Thu 01/10/08 08:52 PM

(((( izzie )))))

<<<<< sits and holds her beautiful daughter for a bit,,,
Love you Mom :heart: flowerforyou



love you mommie

((((mom)))

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 01/11/08 09:21 PM
(((izzie)))
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izzie's photo
Sun 01/13/08 01:09 AM
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no photo
Sun 01/13/08 01:59 AM
i see you have days like mine i hope yours get better ....flowerforyou