Topic: Something different
Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 01/05/08 06:20 PM
Thief

Somewhere in the darkness
Beyond all fear and grief
I know she's there and hiding
The wicked little thief.

Stealing bits of humor
Storing bits of love
Standing in the background
Has she had enough?

I know she's there and waiting
She wants to steal my heart
I know I've deeply moved her
But will she play the part?

She's never really spoken
Thieves though rarely do
Standing in the shadows
So what am I to do?

She's somewhat a mystery
Intrguing my own thought
Waiting for the time
To see what life has brought.

I know she waits in darkness
And what she wants ain't cheap
Perceiving ev'ry moment
My cautious little thief.

Fadedspirit 1/5/2008

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Sat 01/05/08 06:24 PM
Wow.......that was great!flowerforyou

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Sat 01/05/08 06:26 PM
That IS good. Nice!

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Sat 01/05/08 06:28 PM
cool--

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Sat 01/05/08 06:29 PM
Hey Shadow! How's it kickin?

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 01/05/08 06:35 PM
Hey Faded..that was really good. There was good rhythm in there and a good message. Once again, a real good write.

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Sat 01/05/08 06:35 PM


Very Nice !!

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 01/05/08 07:10 PM
Wow...lol....Thanks Y'all for the comments. Hey! who threw those stones? lol j/k

Thanks Wolfeyes. :smile:

Dragoness's photo
Sat 01/05/08 07:24 PM
very goodflowerforyou

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Sat 01/05/08 07:26 PM

Hey Shadow! How's it kickin?


still kickin'--drinker drinker smokin

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 01/06/08 04:40 AM
Thank you Dragoness