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okay so this is my first poem i have posted..... time has passed but my heart still aches from the loss of you i cannot forget you and i do not know what to do i am angry, i am hurt, it is just not fair i am all alone and i cannot find anyone who gives a care life is full of hustle and bustle and moving so fast you were my first love and you will even be my last you are gone and i am here you have made me face my biggest fear i am alone without you by my side but it is not your choice that you died what ever will i do without you in my life i am just Amber.....no longer your wife this pain cuts deep down into my heart i wanted us to be together forever and never be apart as time goes on the pain starts to fade but my wish still is for you to have stayed you did not stay because you couldnt fight what was meant to be once i submit to that truth i shall be set free  You know my feelings and where I am.  
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okay so this is my first poem i have posted..... time has passed but my heart still aches from the loss of you i cannot forget you and i do not know what to do i am angry, i am hurt, it is just not fair i am all alone and i cannot find anyone who gives a care life is full of hustle and bustle and moving so fast you were my first love and you will even be my last you are gone and i am here you have made me face my biggest fear i am alone without you by my side but it is not your choice that you died what ever will i do without you in my life i am just Amber.....no longer your wife this pain cuts deep down into my heart i wanted us to be together forever and never be apart as time goes on the pain starts to fade but my wish still is for you to have stayed you did not stay because you couldnt fight what was meant to be once i submit to that truth i shall be set free oh my sweet jade i loved the poem and am so happy that you finally shared it with everyone. I hope you continue to share the beauty that you have inside thru your poems I have waited a long long long time to read your poem and i loved it now i want to read more I hope you share more soon peace and love ace |
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I like you, just posted my first poem today. Keep writing I liked the way it flowed. Felt your pain.
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Amber......that was very good. I can tell it came from the heart. I hope that you can write more.....
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I think it is a wonderful poem! I am sorry that some jerk had to come in here and show off his lack of intelligence and compassion... especially on your first post of one that meant so much to you. There is always someone in every crowd it seems that tries to be funny when they aren't. I say don't worry about it...most everyone else really enjoyed it. I know I did in fact it inspired me to post some of mine as well. Please don't let him stop you or anyone else for that matter I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
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